It's not too bad for the mix so good job on that. Bit of a tweak and you are there.
Personally I am not a 1 note song guy as it's a tad monotonous (aka hypnotic). You can easily add a little variety for the people via a "release" to 7 semitones below after the break. At the end I also show some quick theory for your next song so it's easier to break out and not be scared to go to more notes. This will probably result in a one chord song so please give a quick google to chord progressions. Does not have to be super complex at all but just to have it in the back of the mind
Pieter
2022-03-07 15:45:03 +0000 UTCPieter
2022-03-07 15:43:33 +0000 UTC