It's a hard one for me to comment on as it could be seen as "art" due to the space the music lives in. The space being the reverb and floaty bleeps and bloops. If it is for an art installation or you want the listener to feel like they are in a wormhole or confusing place it's brilliant. If you want it to be dance ish or you imaging a different environment than it's just too much verb. I would than focus on the dance part (rhythm, bass, lead). Interesting work eitherway