Worth the Candle, ch 105-107
Added 2018-06-19 23:36:38 +0000 UTCChapter 105 is largely in-character notes and supplemental stuff, which you should feel free to skip if that's not the sort of thing you tend to enjoy.
Comments
Fantastic as usual. One suggestion: in chapter 106, when you mention the "Surface Sheath variant," I had no idea what you were talking about and had to look it up. I would suggest saying something like "upset about when the teleportation key got stuck in your tattoo."
Daniel Litt
2018-06-21 02:20:53 +0000 UTCGood bridging.
Drew Gilmour
2018-06-20 17:22:00 +0000 UTC
