Just a feedback pool

It doesn't matter, I think your progress has been great, and even if the subsequent videos maintain the quality of Mona I'm sure there will be more loyal supporters.

xiao xiaoxiao

it's a shame, but usually I'm in a hurry and I don't have time to do everything I've planned. Other animators usually release animation once a month, they can afford such pleasure :( I had ideas for the last animation, but a deadline is a deadline.

Rinjo18

For example, you can add some dialogue during the transition, or like I said before, you can add an ejaculation scene at the end of the short video. Subsequent works can also follow the style of recent works, and add a brief plot or dialogue of about one minute at the beginning, which can improve the overall quality of the video.

xiao xiaoxiao

thanks for the comment :) but can you give a little more detail or show an example ?

Rinjo18

I think your latest Mona is excellent. Adding the story and ejaculation scenes, these make people have a very strong sense of inclusion. You can add the ejaculation scene at the end of the short video, and then the audio track can be proofread again, I believe these details can make your video quality even better.

xiao xiaoxiao

tnx for the answer :)

Rinjo18

The art is fine. After some time, when I look at an image of your work, I can tell that it’s Rinjo_18 which gives it more familiarity to stuff I like. What I would like more of is more facial expressions as a scene progresses. More so when the climax approaches. That’s what comes to mind without asking for too much. Just a little something to make the characters feel more alive and immersive.

Jamison

with Mona will cumshot in every scene :) Usually I just forget to draw the effect itself.

Rinjo18

More lively cumshot and change of movement instead of looping. Thank you very much!

This is one of the reasons why I decided to ask about drawing, by changing it, I think I could implement something similar to najar. The simpler the drawing, the more possibilities for animation

Rinjo18

I myself like the work of najar, but it seems to me that he animates not in live2d, but in spine. In spine, it is much easier to implement the entire range of movements, like this author, and drawing without detailing helps a lot in this.

Rinjo18

me myself feel your animation is quite good but it kind of lacks in some aspects. Take a look of Najar's works, the pace and the overall detail of the animation are just to die for. And the movement of character really make their animation stand out. Just my amateur opinion

MichaelSoft