Bel's Big Adventure
Added 2017-07-16 10:29:59 +0000 UTCI could sink another four hours into this and it would still look unfinished. That's my problem with comics. I end up treating each panel like its own piece instead of a single coherent image. After my September break I might need to put another moratorium on these, I don't know. The last panel is a good example of what minimal shading looks like. I wonder if I could get away with leaving comics like that.
Comments
Yes. You can get away with minimal shading for the comics
ArdenW
2017-07-16 16:54:12 +0000 UTCEros is a precious little rapist. XD
2017-07-16 13:37:59 +0000 UTCI like the minimal shading - especially if full shading is never quite finished and drags you down - it would also create a nice contrast between regular images and comic pages, a slight difference is style - plus, since a comic has at least some semblance of a greater story than just a single image, the overall takeaway will still be greater than a singular image with full shading - tldr: I like the minimal shading, don't hurt yourself agonizing over full shading...
DresdenQ
2017-07-16 11:12:51 +0000 UTCI think the shade looks good, maybe the unfinished felling come of the lack of background in the panels, but as Sorrow says the pace is magnifique and the way you put teh story in just a page is praiseworth. the self criticsm is ok but not be to hard on yourself
Ace
2017-07-16 10:39:24 +0000 UTCRegardless, this is a piece of majesty for me, I love it, the pacing, the colours and the script. Thank you for your time and efforts in making Bel's adventures that much more of a fucking epic.
SorrowBorn
2017-07-16 10:36:15 +0000 UTC
