Miko spider corruption p1-2 sketch
Added 2022-09-21 16:40:29 +0000 UTCFinally begin the first draft sketch!
As always if you have any suggestion or found a mistake. Please feel free to post in the comment.
Comments
The goddess actually hesitated a little bit when kyo mentions her room. Lmao
ArcQUITE
2022-09-24 15:56:34 +0000 UTC너무좋다
현진 서
2022-09-23 04:16:14 +0000 UTClooking good so far!
Pascal
2022-09-22 00:10:16 +0000 UTCYou kumoyasha
ZeroForever
2022-09-21 21:18:29 +0000 UTCAt panel 1 both the 'Shrine' are written as Shirne. Top left Spider Mountain & bottom right Mikoto whiney
2022-09-21 19:26:14 +0000 UTCInteresting; I'm sure their new Goddess will find them appealing!
Arbiter
2022-09-21 18:34:56 +0000 UTCThank you!
ibenz009
2022-09-21 17:36:01 +0000 UTCI love their chemistry!
The7thSage
2022-09-21 16:56:18 +0000 UTCSpelling/grammar typos (corrections in all-caps): Page 1: Panel 2: "Dammit, shut up! YOU'VE BEEN yelling that for an hour!" "You shut up!" YOU'RE SUPPOSED to protect me!" Panel 3 (bottom-left): "I bet the head priest forgot to check the damn thing and DUMPED it on us." Page 2: Panel 1 (top-left): "Wha……wha…!? Why ARE these THINGS UNDRESSING me?! Quit it!" Panel 2 (top-center): "HUNDREDS OF years being IMPRISONED within that stone. Curse that priestess! Look at what you MORTALS have done to my mountain!" "Sigh, it SEEMS THE quality of PRIESTESS have been ERODED over the last few hundred years." Panel 3 (top-right): "It's been so long since I have HAD a VESSEL to enact my authority." Panel 5 (bottom): "You will BE bound to this place. Become part of the mountain."
Benjamin Lawton
2022-09-21 16:53:52 +0000 UTCLooking good, so the mountain goddess is wanting a priestess and champion of her own.
Cryostorm
2022-09-21 16:52:28 +0000 UTCI’d only advice you to double check on the very last dialogue on the 2nd page. I think the message is not quite right (I think)
Alfredo
2022-09-21 16:49:50 +0000 UTC
