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A book tree, a "group project" poll, & a stream this week!

Look! My book tree lamp!

I’m slowly but surely making over my office space and, with the addition of my lounge chair, needed something that wasn’t as abrasive as my overhead light to read by. (Also I needed more space for books. Now the piles look more purposeful! Lol.)

If you want to see the book tree lamp in action, don’t forget that we have a Patreon Preptember stream on Thursday the 12th at 6:45pm CDT! You can find the link to that here. I’m excited to get to work on some of these character bios. If you have a specific template you use, or a question you always “ask” your characters before you begin writing, please let me know!

When I did the "I Tried Writing Like...Rick Riordan," I remember he had a pretty extensive character profile worksheet that he shared. I might start there.

Also, I need your help!

I’m struggling with one of my “assignments” for this Fall Writing Semester and I’ve decided to truly lean into the “school” aspect and turn this into a group project. (Lolol.)

One of my goals is to figure out exactly what I should name my “series” that follows A Closet Full of Cauldrons. (Book 2 = A Basement Brimming with Bodies!)

For a while, I’ve been calling this my “paranormal professional organizer” story and so, I thought, why not spin it off to be “a paranormal professional organizer mystery.” But frankly, it’s too clunky, doesn’t roll off the tongue, and if I as the writer am getting hung up on it, then I just don’t think it’ll work. (Or maybe it will? Maybe it just needs some fine-tuning?)

Having done some research into cozy mysteries, there are a few routes to take:

1) based on the character’s name

2) based on the small town

3) also based on the location (but slightly more specific, mostly the small business the main character runs)

4) based on a side character or a club or theme or whatever else

So you can see how it's written out on Goodreads, but they also often show the series name predominantly on the front cover:

So on the cover it reads "a Georgia B&B mystery" but on Goodreads this is listed as Georgia B&B #1. I'd argue that's how 99% of the ones I saw worked, too.

Anyways, so clearly there's some wiggle room and ways to play with it. But still, ideally it rolls off the tongue!

Let me know what you think of titling series, generally. If you're writing a series, do you plan on using the title of your first book as the series title (something I didn't include here) or have you come up with a separate name?

Please also let me know what you think of my predicament by voting in the poll! I’ve filled each of the categories in with: our ~culturally magickal~ main character (Eva Greenwood), our border town/region possibilities (Eerie Mountains or Mt. Eerie, though these are both still possible to change), and a few different plays on the “paranormal professional organizer mystery.” Let me know which you think sounds best and/or you can most clearly imagine on a book cover! :)

Thank you so much friends. Hope to see you on Thursday! In the meantime, happy writing!

Comments

Idea: A Paranormal Declutter Mystery #1

Lea O.

GEORGINA! I love this so incredibly much. I've been playing with it over and over in my mind and realized I hadn't come here yet to tell you that. THANK YOU.

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

A Creepy Clutter Cosy? Hi Kate 😊 new patron X

Georgina Green

I don't really like character sheets but I always remind myself to add one inconsistency, because Real people are not stereotypes but have inconsistencies. E.g. a cute knitting grandma also loves watching horror. The blonde cheerleader plays online chess. It doesn't have to be relevant to the story at all but just to make them more dimensional

guitarcyyy

This is also how many murder mister games are constructed, euch Person gets one secret and they are allowed to lie about that but not about anything else,while the murderer is allowed to lie about anything. I found this really helpful for mistery plotting as well..

guitarcyyy

I am also in favor of the main character name as the series identifer because it leaves room for your character to have adventures elsewhere. And if you someday you want to do a spinoff series, you can name it after your already-established town setting without losing any SEO you've accumulated. I used to do pretty robust character sheets, but I haven't in a while because it started to feel like procrastination (and honestly, for me, it probably was.) Mine were a series of questions about how the character would react in specific situations like "What do they do if a stranger needs help? What do they do if a loved one needs help?" Sometimes the answer to both is the same, and sometimes it wasn't. Once in a while, I would do short, 1k word one-shot adventures, putting them in that scenario.

Joanna Ortiz

It depends on if all your stories in the series are going to take place in Eerie Mountains. If they are, I would lean towards that, but only if the mystery is unique and dependent to the location. Otherwise, go with the character name.

Ghost Byte

Does Eva's organization business have a name or is it her name? I think your last 3 options are too general and broad. They don't feel personalized to your story. It reads more like a prompt/idea to me.

alessandra

An additional note about naming a series. So, Harry Bosch, Phryne Fisher and Kinsey Milhone are my three examples I'm thinking of. With Bosch the choice to name the character after the painter points to deeper themes within the series (the idea that LA crime has a lot in common with Bosch's darkly themed paintings). Phryne Fisher, her first name relates to the historical Phyrne who kind of vibes with Phyrne's vibes. Kinsey Milhone is less deep afaik but the title is sometimes Kinsey Milhone Alphabet Series. Or the alphabet series but in general it's known mostly for the location it mirrors (Santa Barbara). So, it's usually Sue Grafton's name that's the most iconic part because of her relationship to SB. So, I also think you can consider your themes and how your readers may view those. Usually whatever is most iconic becomes part of how people refer to the series. It may help you as you think about what themes interest you most. Does it matter that she's a paranormal organizer? Is that a big part of the series or simply the profession that gets her into the action? I don't think the series title necessarily is meaningful but it gives you a chance to think about how the words can convey extra things that draw in the reader or make it easier to remember for searches.

Clara Rose Elliott

Paranormal organiser just makes me think "Does it spark terror?" in a twist that Mari Kondo would probably not condone.

Pericula Ludus

This character template is very detailed but no longer available on the main site so internet archive it is: https://web.archive.org/web/20100116080800/http://www.eclectics.com/articles/character.html This is a version of one I have from an older website: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/ And then, as an aside I have a bunch of amazing templates that are (apparently?? I have them from 2010ish) from a book called: Book in a Month by Victoria Lynn Schimdt. It has these great scene breakdowns with tables for Major/Minor characters, scene settings and props, sections per act. I have the templates from when they were available on the Writer's Digest site.

Clara Rose Elliott

My suggestion would be to re-order the wording of your original idea to "Paranormal Organizing Professional" (sounds like real job title, lol) series, which then can be shortened to P.O.P. for ease of reference. For the urban fantasy series I'm working on, I came up with a separate name. My first book is called Anti-Magic's End (debating on the hyphen still), but the series is called "Science & Sorcery", which I'm planning on shortening to S&S (pronounced "S-N-S") for ease of reference.

Rodney Lopez

I'll definitely do that this time, thank you for the suggestion! It'll work perfectly for me story! :)

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

OMG I forgot that piece of Brando Sando advice! (Also I've been watching a lot more D&D content and that feels like something they do a lot as well. Just one little secret....bahaha.)

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

Lolol!!

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

Bummed I have to miss Thursday’s stream but I’m going to see this year’s best musical The Outsiders! Regarding naming, I’ve always liked detective name series by older writers (like Hercule Poirot by Agatha Christie or Nancy Drew by Carolyn Keene) but location series by newer writers. But I agree with Clara that it depends on what your focus is/where you see the series going.

Zara Hoffman

Thank you, Clare!!!! That's really what I was thinking too, I was concerned that just using the main character's name sort of buries the lede with the paranormal aspect. (I know the cover and titles would maybe be able to suggest otherwise, though.) Such a great point about those keywords! Thank you. I have more to mull over now! :)

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

Oooh thank you, that's a great observation as well! Currently I planned for it all to be within the same town and with the same main character, but I can really easily imagine her diving deeper into the ~magickal side~ of the border as the series goes on. That helps a lot, thank you!!

Kate Cavanaugh Writes

You could also do ‘An Eva Greenwood Paranormal Mystery’ if you don’t find it clunky?

Clare Kauter

I feel strongly that if the book titles all have alliteration, the series title has to as well :D

Claire Kinmil

My two cents about naming is that it's going to depend on if you are centering the mysteries on your character or on your location. So, with series that are named after a character you could also go somewhere else and it would make sense. If it's named after the location (ie, everything in the series is central to the place and you might someday utilize a different character), then you'll be centering all the stories on something about the place itself. Fwiw, my series is named by location because the happenings specific to the place are the theme throughout. I have several templates that I'll dig up and post that are character sheets.

Clara Rose Elliott

Hi Kate! Character bios are one of those things that I struggle with because I kind of like to jump to writing with just an overview of the characters and develop their personality arround their reaction to the things happening in the first 5-10 episodes (usually thats 70% of my first acts). But something that I really like to have from the get go is a general description and short bio for their life so far (ussually with bulletpoints) and (this is thanks to Brandon Sanderson that presented it in one of his courses) a secret about them that only they know and haven't told anyone about. That, to me, says a lot about how they're going to react to things and the type of person that they are. I also add a true fear and hope (the deep ones, like fear of abandonment, or insecurities...) that affect their personality (but I start with the secret, I find it makes the process a little more fun).

Adysmyrina

I use ‘The Charlie Davies Mysteries’ as the series name so it’s super clear it’s a mystery series (get those keywords in haha). With a paranormal series I’d say you’d probably want something paranormal-sounding in the series name, whether it’s the town name or the paranormal organizer hook, rather than just the main character’s name. (I mean Riley Thorn is paranormal, but Lucy Score can basically do whatever she likes. 😂)

Clare Kauter


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