(Ch. 11) I, Wife 2.0
Added 2024-10-18 00:04:10 +0000 UTCJaney arrives back home, much to Matt's surprise, and changes abound in the Jenkins' household. Annie and Matt also find that their office lives are becoming much more complicated.
Comments
Great chapter, love the ending! I'm relieved that Janey and Matt are still in each others lives in the real world.
armchairbull
2024-10-18 06:27:43 +0000 UTCWhy do I get the feeling that it'll be Annie Jenkins and Jane Mason ?
Fiji Waterman
2024-10-18 02:49:39 +0000 UTCOne version of this story ends here, and i think it’d be a mildly satisfying dark ending. I hope it doesn’t and i am hoping for gideon to switch Annie and Janey’s places in Matt’s life.
Morticentrum
2024-10-18 02:12:20 +0000 UTCGood chapter, but there still conflicting information between this one and last chapter. Previous chapter: Matt said that he hadn't seen Lilith foster and in extent Janey for a weeks, Annie then replied that they are back as of today. This chapter: Annie had seen Janey building her reputation as Office Bitch since five weeks ago. Same with Lilith Foster, this chapter state that Gideon had erased memories about Lilith from all the staff but previous chapter Annie and Matt could still recall Lilith. Well, your previous comment on last chapter post told that going against the chip work like swimming against the current, so maybe the two were in cycle of forget and recall. Maybe Annie sometimes forgetting about Janey, that she was only remembering Janey as the office bitch and not Janey, Matt's wife, basically treating them as two different individuals and not the same person. How about tweaking Janey the office bitch name to Jane or Janna or whatever not Janey, like Kendra to Kendall, and Lilith to Lily, for distinction. So yeah, I still really hope we got some flashback of Janey and Lilith during the five previous weeks, especially after the work hours end. This chapter told that it was Janey first time to return home after first week, but it shouldn't be the first time Janey allowed to go 'home' after work hours end. Where did Gideon hide them? Did Gideon bring them to his home? left them trained by Reed? or somewhere else? I think it can be explored a little.
deepediamcs
2024-10-18 01:41:11 +0000 UTC
