(Ch. 7) I, Wife 2.0
Added 2024-09-02 12:05:42 +0000 UTCMatt comes up with a plan to find out what happened to Lilith Foster. However, things end up going terribly wrong and poor Janey ends up facing the consequences of Matt's short-sighted plans.
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Hey there! Any idea when we will see the next chapter!? I can't wait to read what you have got in store for Janey, Matt and all the others. And if we will see a darker side of Gideon.
Gehtdie Nixan
2024-09-10 13:56:50 +0000 UTCLooks like Melanie will have some friends to play with!
Fiji Waterman
2024-09-04 01:30:23 +0000 UTC>He can force her to spill the bean. I thought Gideon arrived at the conclusion that Janey and in an extend Matt had some bad plan against him, thus the reason why he want to store Janey first as he concocts some plan to deal with Matt. Reason sometimes aren't important for a narcissist like Gideon, he already see it as an attack against him. But I agree with you, if there is an internal monologue about Gideon thought process regarding this one, it will be better
deepediamcs
2024-09-02 20:43:55 +0000 UTCOk. When you discribe it like this it makes a bit more sense for me. It's nice to read about his / your motives. Maybe you could add some more internal monologues. In my opinion it would flesh out his character nicely My criticism maybe came around a bit harsh - was a long day at work! sorry for that! Just because dumbing down and infanticism is not my favorite piece of smut does not mean that I have a right to criticise your writing. As many others I can't wait what happens in future chapters!
Gehtdie Nixan
2024-09-02 18:18:03 +0000 UTCFair points! As I’m writing Gideon, I don’t see him as worried about getting caught—he’s just buying time. Where Reed was the impulsive, sloppy pervert, Gideon is a calculated, power-hungry narcissist. He likes seeing the reduction in status for the women in the office, and IQ reduction only heightens the fun for him. He won’t break his work rule (yet) but he knows a place where it can happen without his supervision. And maybe there ARE others that are programmed (or soon to be programmed) to lose their memory when they leave…
Yazzers
2024-09-02 17:06:11 +0000 UTCAmazing as always! I'm very curious as to where this will go!
bookread1331
2024-09-02 16:16:08 +0000 UTCAll this dumbing down seems a bit ... pointless. He just transferred all privileges from Matt to himself. He could just instruct Janey to forget what she wanted to do for Matt or force her to spill the beans. So why just dumb her down and store her away. Or if she is his next project he could just tell Matt that Janey will be away for some time and WORK ON HIS project. I mean - I have no idea where this is going at the moment but to store the ex-boss and his new secretary away in the basement where many male employees can see them (I guess they gossip too that there is fresh meat in the toy room - especially when it's their former boss) and all the secretaries are obviously gossiping all the time anyway. This just produces more witnesses that do not forget everything that happens at work as soon as they leave.
Gehtdie Nixan
2024-09-02 15:05:58 +0000 UTCInteresting developments. Lots of IQ reduction lately, but that makes sense given Gideon's been the one causing trouble and that seems to be his MO. I am curious to see if Foster's earlier commands about how he should treat his secretary carry over, or if Matt interpreted them to be specifically about Janey. If the latter, hopefully Matt gets into personality creation/adjustment shenanigans again now that he has a new secretary to play with. If the former, I guess that gives Riley a reason to get more involved. Regardless, Annie and Riley definitely appear to be the wild cards in all this and I'm interested to see where things go from here!
Istmael
2024-09-02 13:40:12 +0000 UTCGood one, a little disappointed that Gideon didn't do more to Janey in this chapter and straight sent her to the warehouse, but maybe it will in the next chapter. Gideon being Janey handler open up a lot of possible new dynamic for the Jenkins. Hopefully, Gideon will utilize her or Lilith in a deliciously wicked manner to teach Matt a lesson to not trying to cross him instead just storing them away. Or if Gideon don't want to make a direct move, he can delegate Reed as temporary 'hunter' to mess with Matt's life with Janey and Lilith (and even Blair) under his command
deepediamcs
2024-09-02 12:32:18 +0000 UTC
