face grip
Added 2018-06-23 01:49:27 +0000 UTCwell i mostly messed up today but i do like the way this one looks. it has a nice painted feel too it
i have an idea for the big blu wuufy by doing a "comic book" but just by one illustration at a time and see how that works
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/hea73dyujk1vlzp/AADeHsEYjJlpHucOrcljU6Wia?dl=0
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nice! thank you for all that i will get onto it ;)
Hatton Slayden
2018-06-23 14:32:13 +0000 UTCokay for once i did not came days after... let's see: - Cuddle Time. 😍 'nuff said. - Face Grip. Much Mlem. 😍 - Flutter hellow. Is that a vagina or is she happy to see him? 😆👍 - Hang-10. Looks hang-6 to me... and ouch those claws are going to sting, aside from that.. nice! 😍👍 - Hold Fast. i... think the face of the gecko butterfly girl is a bit too real compared to the rest of the picture. For once you might want to scale down on the level of precision, most of the picture is done with broad strokes, but head and tail feel too neat and precise compared to the rest. The wings do not give the same impression on account that you have a sprayed background and this (at least from my perception) they meld well with the background level of precision. - hold fast 3. Censorsheick is a true professional. 🤣👍 - Pixy Fly. Nice! 😍👍 - Tongue tied. A favourite of mine for the non-human girls. 😍👍 - Watching you work. Again the face of the girl feels too precise, but the rest feels perfect. 😍👍 i based my judgements on the following level of "perceived completion" of the work: - cuddle time. almost finished. - face grip. almost finished. - flutter hellow. practically finished. - hang 10. much more than halfway through - hold fast. practically finished. - hold fast 3. finished. - pixy fly. halfway through. - tongue tied. halfway through. - watching you. somewhat more than halfway through. You might ask why i complained about the extreme precision of the face of the girl in that 2 pictures but not the level of blurriness of the backgrounds or the face of the man, which is often even more detailed. I already explained why i had no problem with the level of detail of the wings, so let me give you 2 reasons: 1) the face of the man is "monochromatic", he's "meat colored" and light brown haired. You went in a lot of details in there for a lot of the shot but from my perspective, unless i check very well it all melds compared to the explosion of colors of the girl. 2) you went for blurred out background with well defined forefront objects to a "messy noise" or "blurred background" which tricks the eye into seeing more details than there are. Also the fact that the background is mostly variations of a single color makes the characters stand out but the level of detail of the line work does not make the eye feel tricked if it wanders. Much like in the forests of one of your recent folios where the trees were not detailed, but you sprayed leaves and leaflets abundantly, if the eye is tricked then it feels like there are more details than there actually are... and it does not stand out as much. Also "flutter hellow" has the same level of detail that i complained about, but the fact that the man is a lot more defined in its contrasts does not make the precision of the girl's color stand out much. I would suggest you to find some brush for a quick "bioluminescence" effect on some of the mushrooms, i think it will work well. All in all a great work. Love it.
Simone Spinozzi
2018-06-23 11:41:50 +0000 UTC
