Working on hypnosis script for demo

I've been real busy lately. My wife and I bought a house and we are there on a daily basis, working hard to make things perfect to move in later this year. Soon enough most work will be done by professional people, so I should be able to work more on this again. I highly prefer working in this instead of making my body hurt from all the physical work I had to do lately. 

Anyway, that's not what this post is about.

The session creator comes along slowly I also worked on a script for the demo. When it is finished I'll use TTS software to make it into an audio file. 

Would you like to take a look at the current draft? Here it is. Typos will be fixed later and I guess it still hast a few rough edges. The end isn't done yet and is is supposed to give the subject a choice to wake up or stay to repeat the file. It is supposed to work like a recursive program, if that makes sense to you.

Do you have feedback for me?

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Conditioning
Test 001

Ready for mindless
trance.

Hello
Subject.

Welcome
to the Mind Melting Machine!

Please relax your
body and relax your mind. Get loose and comfortable.

You will
not resist.

You will
Obey.

You are safe.

You are here to be
conditioned. You desire to go deep into trance and experience this augmented
state of mind. You want to be able to enter this state more easily and quicker,
improving yourself to reach deeper hypnotic depths than before.

You can probably
sense how  the visuals are imroving your
minds relaxation. You are breathing calmly and your mind is letting go.

Fact: Your mind is
always trying to predict the near future. It prepares for everything. Your
brain precalculates what it can, it is an instinct that developed for best
survival in daily dangers of life. This means that if you are told that
something happens at the end of a countdown it will anticipate it to happen.
Your mind even will help it to happen if possible so that things will happen as
it anticipated. This is how the brain works.

Knowing this you
even are now expecting a countdown to happen.

10

Relaxing the mind

9

Relaxing your body

8

Feeling good

7

More relaxed

6

Reaching deeper
trance on zero

5

Conscious mind
letting go

4

Subconscious mind
opening up

3

Gettiing ready for
increased level of trance

2

Improved focus on
here and now

1

Ready for mindless
trance!

0

Dropping Deep!
Deeper and deeper. Mind is blank, mind is void.

We will now
reinforce certain processes in your mind.

Reaching a trance
state

There is a trigger
phrase that will work for you in the future. It will enable you quickly switch
your mind into a trance state. Your conscious mind will be able to instantly
let go, noisy thinking will be suspended and you can open up yourself for commands.
The phrase is "Ready for mindless trance!" On entering trance your
subconscious will verify and that it is safe to enter a prologed trance state
and if it trusts the entity using the trigger phrase with you. If it is not
safe to go under or if it is unwilling to trust the triggerng entity then it
will bring you back to full consciousness instantly and in the blink of an eye.
If it is safe to enter trance and trust is given then you will completely
switch into deep trance at least as deep as it is now. And you are probably
going even deeper now justthinking about going deeper.

Another thing is
that you are doing by now is that you associate your current situation with a
deep trance and an open and obedient and accepting mind. And you will always do
when this program is running, when your vision is consumed with hypnotic effects.
Your consciousness shuts down and your subconsciousness opens up and becomes
more accepting of what it sees and hears. Your mind expects these things to
happen and makes them happen.

The program starts
and you become Ready for mindless trance! And iitfeels so good. In fact, you
really like this feeling. Deep in trance. Open. Obedient. Accepting. No matter
if you remember anything or everything after trance, you know that it makes you
feel good. You like beiing deep in trance, you lilke to be open and obedient
and you just accept.

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What do you think?