Delvers LLC #1, new cover, draft 1
Added 2018-01-03 07:29:46 +0000 UTCI absolutely love how this is turning out so far.
Thoughts?
Comments
You still with us Blaise? *Pokes author with stick*
Robert Brandt
2018-01-05 01:53:49 +0000 UTCI really like it.
Cameron C
2018-01-04 01:38:43 +0000 UTCThis cover looks really good.
Linton Bowers
2018-01-03 12:52:17 +0000 UTCI'm with Stephen on this Jason looks too clean also too young, maybe shaggier hair would help. But Henry is spot on. The girls are beautiful, maybe change the dress to blue for Maureen. I also think the cover would attract attention. If you're shooting for attracting more young adult crowd, then Jason is close, still too neat though.
Robert Brandt
2018-01-03 12:01:14 +0000 UTCJason looks a too short, young and like a boy band some where is missing a member. Strangely Henry looks really close to my mental image of him. Uluula looks a bit taller than she should be as well. Still in fairness The cover *does* look cool. If I hadn't already read the book that cover would tickle my interests.
Stephen E Wilson Jr.
2018-01-03 08:53:42 +0000 UTCyeah, that was my first reaction too!
Daniel Sifrit
2018-01-03 08:38:55 +0000 UTCThis looks fantastic!
Micah Rutledge
2018-01-03 08:12:43 +0000 UTCI like the way it looks, though considering the relationships aren't the women behind the wrong men?
Daniel Schinhofen
2018-01-03 07:34:53 +0000 UTC
