After-hours 24 p8 up, what's next?
Added 2018-01-06 02:56:43 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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I was thinking of something like that for the page after. Fel could show up and notice the noise in the last few panels of this page but the peephole thing feels like it needs space.
Mr Ru
2018-01-09 22:17:33 +0000 UTCHow about after the initial thrusting, we have a panel of Fel arriving, closing the door, saying something like "...That took longer than expected... wait, what is that noise?" with bubbles of moans coming from off-frame. Next panel has Fel's eye through the peephole as aldo is full on mating-pressing that bun (like so, nsfw beware <a href="https://e621.net/post/show/1384321/2017-animated-anthro-anus-anvil_position-backsack-" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://e621.net/post/show/1384321/2017-animated-anthro-anus-anvil_position-backsack-</a> ) I dont want to invest a lot of frame-time on Fel getting home, since we've really had very little porn-time until now :U
Kenno Arkkan
2018-01-07 05:02:31 +0000 UTCStart with Al doing her gently from on top. He's almost more nervous than her and asks if she feels alright. Soon Al asks if Bonnie if she'd like to ride on top of him so she can set her own pace (and also cause he feels awkward looking at her from this position).
Randal Eaglebauer
2018-01-07 03:18:28 +0000 UTCI'm thinking a closeup panel of his dick head pressing up against her dividing wet pussy, going into a whole body side view of him all-in as her lifting her legs up a little in reaction and monos about how warm and different it feels. Not sure if it should have an xray view or a panel showing internals as she describes it. She lifts her legs further and grabs his butt to pull him closer. Dunno if this is a good page to show Fel coming in through the front door at the last panel.
Mr Ru
2018-01-06 03:17:52 +0000 UTC
