After-hours 24 p6 up, what's next?
Added 2017-12-23 04:06:03 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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Well, i think 1 page of fingering shouldn't be too bad. I'd be willing to add 10 more pages or so to end in a 14-16 page comic. Say we add 10, that leaves us 1 for fingering, and 8 for sex, and 1 for the end/surprise party, for example. in those 8 pages i think we can cover quite a lot of ground. What do you guys think? How long do you wish this comic to be?
Kenno Arkkan
2017-12-25 14:37:03 +0000 UTCThinking on it, I should ask if we want to take time on the fingering stuff when we're already 6 pages in. It would be cute but we had a lot of that with Fel already and it's less room for them to go through the kamasutra, unless people want to make this comic longer. So alternative could be Aldo stopping things to get condoms, getting them out of the drawer and being told he won't need them by Bonnie, who is standing naked in the room with him and nervously explaining she's on the pill or something. Then the next page is set for them starting.
Mr Ru
2017-12-24 19:45:36 +0000 UTCi like the idea of a nude Bonnie surprising Al like a successful seduction to make up for her earlier awkward attempt.
Arukath Hellsaint
2017-12-23 23:21:22 +0000 UTCMakes sense. I was thinking Al would be "brb, getting some protection" to the melted bun, either intending to prepare things in the bedroom and call her in or return and do it in the lounge. She just surprises him by standing naked and ready in the bedroom as he's getting condoms from the drawer.
Mr Ru
2017-12-23 22:17:12 +0000 UTCWe can leave the whole "Bons wants it bareback, al's concerned, bon says she's safe" ordeal for the page after that I suppose
Kenno Arkkan
2017-12-23 17:05:27 +0000 UTCI like the bun melting! Also, shouldn't both go to the bedroom? That way a) we have a bit more free range of positions on the bed and b) thats where fel will find them, right? :o
Kenno Arkkan
2017-12-23 14:47:03 +0000 UTCBonnie shifts focus to what Aldo's hand is doing, with her shorts being moved aside to finger. I'm thinking it could go two ways. They keep going until Aldo's about to cum and suggests moving on. Other idea is that Bonnie gets so distracted by the pleasuring that she stopped jerking him and has melted into the sofa with her legs out. (He doesn't mind since this is for her anyway) I figure the page ends with him getting up and going to the bedroom for condoms.
Mr Ru
2017-12-23 04:45:20 +0000 UTC
