After-hours 24 p4 up, what's next?
Added 2017-12-09 05:00:08 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below. I believe we established next page would be Aldo setting some ground rules, mostly for -his- safety haha
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Yeah i'd say the page should end with either a closeup of Bonnie's face staring at it (to hint at what's gonna be on next page) or just straight up Al dick out and bonnie contemplating D: I was thinking the page should begin with them already sitting sideways on the couch facing each other
Kenno Arkkan
2017-12-10 04:57:48 +0000 UTCand after that, Probably Al sitting next to Bonnie and asking where she wants to start, ending with her shyly asking to see "it". Lot to fit in but then the talk is all done and we're into the action.
Mr Ru
2017-12-10 04:47:23 +0000 UTCYeah, Al starts about generic rules like "no means no", Bonnie says she trusts him but he says the rules are for him, maybe with a silly doodle as he remembers some funny injury he got from Fel being too wild. (Hips in a cast or bandaged nose from the face/butt pounding thing they tried in that old MLFW comic)
Mr Ru
2017-12-09 12:33:15 +0000 UTC
