Poke A Verse chapters 1, 2, 3
Added 2023-10-17 01:27:24 +0000 UTCThis is a silly side series I've been working on this month. I wanted to do something with an Arcanine and his trainer but didn't want to just DO a story of that so I added a lot more.
This is still a WIP but I thought I'd post it to get your thoughts on the matter and if I should continue this or if I should even open it up to choose who is chosen. I've been wanting to do a multiple "routes" kind of story like I've seen in other furry media.
In the meantime, I'll be working on the next chapter to Broken Pieces. Thank you.
Comments
Agreed. I'll prob finish Apollo and just call it good. It is very odd and hard to write this even as a silly side story.
Roofles
2023-10-18 02:08:20 +0000 UTCGood read! I'm excited to see more of Apollo ;) I normally don't like Pokémon based stories, but I think you did a good job of separating them from mild less animals (that only say their name) by giving them personalities. I think the biggest problem with Pokémon stories is that when you introduce a Lucario for example, then I picture a Lucario and not a unique character. I would prefer if writers didn't even call it a Lucario and just describe it's characteristics.
adam anderson
2023-10-17 10:13:45 +0000 UTCOkay, Team rocket came in and stoled my printer, a poke ball is flashing on the spot where the printer was, and the paper was twirling in the air. . . Not bad chapter. Its just one of the big frusting things seeing posted on SF all the kiddy pokemon, my little pony, and 99% of those posting the stuff can't even write a straight english word with out it being the same story repeated over and over. :P Seems like this one is done in reverse instead of the normal the human is the pokemon and the pokemon are the humans lol.
Ashen Hugo-Blind Wolf
2023-10-17 01:54:55 +0000 UTC
