Ah, page 16. There were two sets of dialog for this page, the one above and the one below:
Safi: I don’t see anything. That’s probably not a good thing.
Rika: I feel it too.. something’s off. I really wish I had my armor.
Safi: It’s probably in her magic bag, if we can get it back. Vines?
Rika: Yeah, I think I see a spot on the other ledge that’d be good for that. I’m surprised you’re still up for this!
Safi: Psh, like you’d turn back now. I’m good with water magic any-
??!
Rika: Other side’s closing! Run!
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Anyway, no one I showed the script to preferred one set over the other - aside from Eldrik leaning towards the one we went with.
Mandarion
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