A Storm's Lullaby Page 128
Added 2020-10-31 12:56:50 +0000 UTCThistle is having a very bad day.
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'Come' is present tense, as it is here. 'Came' is past tense, Tempest hadn't altered her thoughts on this earlier, only now when she overheard this discussion. Also "If only you had told me-" makes more sense.
Steve Lynx (Boulder)
2020-11-01 09:46:09 +0000 UTCAw crap. It’s starting to rain again... Bad omen. Also, in the top right panel it should be “but I came to believe-”. And in the middle left panel it should be “if only you told me-“.
Double R Forrest
2020-11-01 04:48:41 +0000 UTCtouché... although this time the rain is connected to the events, not just a mere metaphor.
2020-10-31 14:36:38 +0000 UTCI don't think Lulu is related to Tempest whether they are old or not. it is just said that she felt it had come to a head. at what point in Thistle's dialogue we make it natural ? https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/A-Storm-s-Lullaby-Page-15-808450623
Lux The Pegasus
2020-10-31 14:35:22 +0000 UTCit is sure from the moment when we are treated as a liar, there is who to believe it (no the spectator does not count) good on the other hand if there is rain every time a character argues this, I find his cliché.
Lux The Pegasus
2020-10-31 14:29:55 +0000 UTC
