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A Storm's Lullaby Page 126 Inks

Siblings reunite. 


A Storm's Lullaby Page 126 Inks

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Currently you guys are two days ahead.

Maybe one thing you could do is have the patreons be one full page ahead of the deviantart ones.

Oh, the sad part is only just beggining.

I wonder... :0

Hmm, I know what you mean. I was wondering about it. A page like this would be good for the flow of the story but I think not very interesting altogether tbh. So I hope the dialogue - and the colour, too - will smooth out this transation a bit a bit. (This may be a bonus page in Book 4 though).

Oh wow, that was quick. I mean, I’m glad we didn’t leave Lulu to be sad for a long time, but that was quick.

Double R Forrest

I've fixed the neck.

it's a bit sudden the events between the previous page and this one, I would have devoted a page or two more to the reaction and the investigation of Tempest and Thistle when they realized that she was gone

Lux The Pegasus

Oh, look! It's Fireweed! I'm sure he will be happy to learn he has become an uncle. :D

Myrkin

Thistle's neck does seem kind of long in the second panel. But I'm glad she is not afraid to get mad and yell at Lullaby when it's appropriate. I do hope that you won't add a "Don't feel bad" to this. Lullaby should feel bad about what happened. I always hated that when adults did that. That I wasn't allowed to feel bad when I did something wrong.


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