Hey guys! I didn't complete everything I wanted to today, but we made good progress anyway. We completed the following tasks:
That's only 2 story points completed today – but I made progress on some other tasks. 28 to go!
Green Screen teardown
There are a few lines of writing in the game that I'm (absurdly) proud of, and would fight to keep. The vast bulk, though, is just a rough first draft that needs editing.
The green screen scene, where the agent poses naked in the JTF Neptune bunker, could especially use some attention. A certain patron (whose name escapes me – sorry – but whose insight did not) fed back that the scene drags, especially on replays. I agree completely.
Normally I'd add "fix the green screen scene" to my to-do list, and wait for it to bubble to the top. But as an experiment, I'd love to hear your ideas about how to make this scene better.
If this method works well, we could do regular scene teardowns (and thereby continually improve the content in the game based on the thousands of minds in the community).
Okay, that's all for today. Next dev day is tomorrow, see you then!