INTEMPERANCE VII - CHAPTER 14, Suggestions
Added 2023-08-02 02:33:31 +0000 UTCOkay, I managed to finish this one up tonight now that I've gotten a good night/morning's sleep. This one is a pivotal chapter in the tale, leading us down a new road. As always, let me know what you think and I always love those suggestions, though I may not use them.
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And now you've got it!
Al Steiner
2023-08-20 09:15:00 +0000 UTCI have to admit that I've expected this particular idea to raise its pretty little head for ages. (OK, well, months.)
Matthias Urlichs
2023-08-11 10:10:37 +0000 UTCIt's a background thing. It establishes character and can be used to advance the plot when necessary (such as it did when it came time to meet Andre), but describing scenes there with no purpose does not advance the story.
Al Steiner
2023-08-09 20:33:23 +0000 UTCgreat chapter Al... I was wondering if Jake has played in the cop bar since his shooting or is that zbackground thing?
Russ Wideman
2023-08-09 18:57:32 +0000 UTC
