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The Book Club #13 - Page 37 (Pencils and Inks)

I wanted to try to do more "split pages" in this issue, making sure to show various scenes as they are all happening simultaneously around the party. I think it helps give a sense of scope of all the action taking place.

For this page, I also ended up adding in a couple of extra panels from what I originally had scripted. Usually I follow fairly close to what I have written, only changing some text here and there occasionally. Every now and again as I am laying out the page I feel the flow is off, or a specific action needs to be spotlighted more. For this one I ended up adding in more panels for the Lupe and Lorraine scene and Lupe helping her with her gloves because I thought it was sexy and needed more attention drawn to it.

The Book Club #13 - Page 37 (Pencils and Inks) The Book Club #13 - Page 37 (Pencils and Inks) The Book Club #13 - Page 37 (Pencils and Inks)

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