sadness - 8:00 pm on a thursday

Thursday, November 3, 2022 at 10:41 . took a very long time to finish thius song because i didnt really work on it for a long time. i only recently finally wrote the lyrics for the verses which was the finishing touch that it needed. my cousin nila sings on this (aswell as pretty face which i jhust poisted ) - i started making this song because i wanted to try to write a genuine pop song. and by that i mean a 100% literal pop song in every sense of the word. all of my music is very poppy but i had never written a pure pop song and i had never written a song with basic song structure so i wantred to try that (this means a song with verses and a chorus and even sections that actually repeat) i never make songs like this but one deay i thought it would be cool to try it. the only thing this needs to be a legitamete pop song is to have good production but unfortunately i cannot provide that, although i did try but i gave up quikly, especially if i ever want to release the song. i could spend ages trying to perffect the production but i do not have the patience to do that, so what i have i guess could qualify as a demo for a pop song. thats another reason i didnt share this song sooner is because i cant possibly satisfied with the production until a million dollar producer works on it, so to save the mental stress of never being satisfied with how my songs sound im just going to leave it as is,. lyrically im trying to describe what it 8:00 pm on a thursday feels like, particuarly in springtime like april. this song is going on the same split with "pretty face" and another song i have not finished yet:

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first verse:

the view from on top of the world

is on the roof of your orange house

somehow there are no hills in sight

yet a mountain range in your bedroom

at the line where the sky begins

begins the warmest moment of the day

a blanket of april twilight

and the stars run through your veins

prechorus:

in the shadows of evening leaves

there's a light that won't fade

and its burning your hand in mine

when it rains and they won't see me

they won't see us this time

chorus:

somewhere in a spring night i know

all the many sounds we share

we couldn't have heard them all

when the only one i hear is your touch

if the world is in my hands

why is it so hard to tell

to tell you how, just how i feel

i wanna see the stars with you

second verse:

stars in your eyes

melt into my hands

my hands melt into yours

your hands become my eyes

i want to see

everything you touch

everything you love

everything you are

prechorus:

in the shadows of evening leaves

there's a light that won't fade

and its burning your hand in mine

when it rains and they won't see me

they won't see us

we're on top of the world

bridge:

stars in your eyes

melt into my hands