Here is the manuscript for chapter 2 - WARNING: It's super long lol about 10 pages
Tell me what you think in the comments, I always love reading them and responding when I can and feel the need to :)
Enjoy!
-Ana
Chapter 2
Danny is shocked to see Lily. “Lily…”
Lily begins to tear up then runs down the stairs to Danny, her blanket flying off. She leaps into Danny’s arms and he catches her, making him fall back. Lily...
2023-11-05 07:39:36 +0000 UTC
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Thanks everyone that gave me constructive criticism for the last part. I'm much happier with this version and it would've been a flop without you!
I took many shortcuts the first time and I made sure to take my time and rethink the whole scene. I feel it's more impactful and now sets up events that will recur later in the series.
2023-11-05 07:29:01 +0000 UTC
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I took the day to think about the first part of the chapter involving Lily's mom, and gave the whole scene much consideration. I added a bit of backstory through dialogue and tried to make it feel more like an argument advancing to a fight.
I appreciate any more feedback to make this even better and more impactful.
Full page of Lily’s journey back home in the late afternoon. She arrives at her mom’s house and it’s empty. Lily begi...
2023-11-04 05:13:31 +0000 UTC
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I've gotten feedback on the latest chapter, and I'm taking the day to think about it. I took shortcuts that backfired drastically. I'm gonna rewrite the scene and mostly redraw it.
Thanks for the feedback.
-Ana
2023-11-03 20:44:41 +0000 UTC
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Reunited at last!
Some shots with Lily and her mom feel weird, mainly visually. Hope to fix it later
Tell me what you think!
2023-11-03 07:17:26 +0000 UTC
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Sorry it's taking long to get pages sketched. Had a couple commissions and irl stuff come up.
Should have the next part to chapter 1 out tomorrow
2023-11-03 05:00:42 +0000 UTC
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Cuteness overload
OG fans might recognize the original inspiration
2023-11-01 05:17:14 +0000 UTC
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Lily Armstrong - first loli on the moon
Nude ver - https://baraag.net/deck/@Anamadic/111325077129557258
2023-10-30 17:15:47 +0000 UTC
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She's too adorable, give her the whole bowl!
2023-10-30 03:19:24 +0000 UTC
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She is my mommy
2023-10-29 23:15:49 +0000 UTC
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Battle ready
2023-10-29 04:10:49 +0000 UTC
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Happy couple
2023-10-26 18:48:51 +0000 UTC
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Protect yourself
2023-10-25 16:07:52 +0000 UTC
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Scary
2023-10-24 16:30:34 +0000 UTC
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Starting off the second book! With more heartbreak...
The part of Lily breaking into tears and screaming was in the script but I felt it was necessary for this emotional moment of Lily resorting to staying with her mother.
Legit almost started tearing up when I began piecing the scene together in my head.
It's not gonna be this sad for much longer
2023-10-24 08:29:18 +0000 UTC
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Did these sketches today to concept Lily's mom's house for book 2
2023-10-24 01:07:15 +0000 UTC
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Shopping trip!
Outfit for a scene in book 2!! I can't wait!
Also gonna use this as a wall scroll design!
2023-10-23 06:55:58 +0000 UTC
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I've decited to start posting the script for book 2. I have also decided to jump straight into sketching the next book instead of waiting till next year. I hope to have a lot sketched before next year so I can start posting pages then.
-Ana
From Now On, I’m Taking This Girl Under My Wing - Book 2
Chapter 1
Flashback to Sunday. (No type setting till Thursday)
Lily leaves Danny’s apartment and begins walking home.
2023-10-23 00:58:45 +0000 UTC
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She's royalty in my eyes
2023-10-22 17:18:30 +0000 UTC
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I have a lot of the script for book 2 complete and was wondering if I should post them here, chapter by chapter.
Let me know in the comments if I should post them here!
2023-10-22 03:36:27 +0000 UTC
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Elegance
2023-10-20 16:02:29 +0000 UTC
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Inspired by the McDonalds loli :)
2023-10-18 17:25:46 +0000 UTC
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She's so cute! I'd let her destroy me.
I like to think Lily asked Danny to bring boxes home from work just for this.
2023-10-17 16:30:57 +0000 UTC
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Lily loves school and looking cute!
2023-10-16 02:36:13 +0000 UTC
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This book is Finally finished.
I'm incredibly happy with this book, I first wrote this in November last year during my only semester at college. I left college and started doing things I actually wanted to do, and I'm incredibly happy making comics!
Thank you all so much for supporting me and this massive project!
I'm currently finalizing the manuscript for book 2 and will begin sketching in January!
2023-10-14 20:32:18 +0000 UTC
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Cuteness
2023-10-14 18:03:45 +0000 UTC
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She loves them equally
2023-10-13 16:41:29 +0000 UTC
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Yes Lily, it's adorable!
2023-10-12 16:01:00 +0000 UTC
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She's cute, but she'll beat you up
Win, win
2023-10-11 16:01:52 +0000 UTC
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Good girl
Nude ver. https://baraag.net/@Anamadic/111212150280166326
2023-10-10 18:34:33 +0000 UTC
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