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CMSN: Overwatch Goes Stepford (Chapter One)

Thank you to Shinylamp for the commission! 

This is going to be a bit different from most of the comms I've posted thus far. We're taking it one chapter at a time, and so new chapters will come as they're commissioned. As a result, they won't be the same sort of regular "every other week" updates as we get with my normal stories, instead happening as Shinylamp and I get to them. There'll be another chapter posted in a few days though, so be on the lookout for that!

Help for a friend?

Hey everybody, I'm so sorry about this, but a dear friend of mine is in a rough spot right now. You may remember a while back when my friend Raananah's apartment burned down, and I posted a link to her gofundme? I appreciate so so much anybody who was able to help out then, and I'm sorry to say she's in need again. 

Her cat, Bowie, has a UTI, and the surgery to fix it is expensive. Bowie is one of the sweetest cats I've ever known, and it would mean the world to me if people could ...

Influence Me (Chapter 1)

Here we have not only our next multi part story, but also quite possibly the longest gestating story I've ever written? It kinda requires some explanation. 

Around a year or so into me writing these longer prose stories on patreon, rather than the captions I began with, I had an idea for a story which focused on social media in Stepford. Originally it was going to be sort of an epistolary story, with everything being relayed via text posts on an internet message board used by house...

Patron Update: Frustrating News

Hey everybody, I just wanted to give a quick heads up about something. I'm gonna try to skirt around it a bit simply to avoid it getting flagged, but the short version is that Patreon has decided to start deleting the accounts of anybody who posts a particular type of kink content. 

Being that I have, myself, posted a small handful of stories that feature that content, I'm at risk of this as well, although hopefully less at risk than many other creators who have already had their a...

Writing Commission Slots Open

Hey everyone! Just wanted to put up a new post about writing commissions! 

I'm going to be taking new commissions for a bit, with the same rates as before. I'll put the guidelines below!

-The rate is $75 for every 3,000 words (which is the length of most of the commissions I've done so far, for reference)

-I'm willing to write Stepfordization or stories which feature ABDL or Bimbofication elements

-No underaged characters or incest

-No TG

-I reserve th...

CMSN: Gothless

Thanks to Dragoncanalove for commissioning this story! 

The pitch was for a story focusing on a tomboy goth girl being stepfordized, first physically and then mentally, after entering a Stepford-like town. I decided to set the story in the Pacific Northwest simply because I like the idea that these towns like Stepford are all over the country, just in random areas. There's one in Oregon, in New York, in Texas and Arkansas and Utah and, obviously, Connecticut. There are as many of t...

Stepford Ad Company 3

The grand return of a classic story! 

I've taken a fair amount of time off since the last Ad Company story, since 2021 if I remember correctly, but I'd been planning on bringing it back eventually. I just didn't want to force it until I had enough segment ideas, and it'll be the same for if/when I write a fourth version. But it's a story I enjoy coming back to, since it lets me play with anthology storytelling, which is something I absolutely adore. I've been a lifelong fan of horr...

Bunker Type (Stepfordization)

So, this story is gonna be a bit of a different animal from my usual work. It's still stepfordization, but it's a different setting (and universe) from my typical Stepford stuff. It's also a story that, at least to me, feels a bit more sinister than my other stories. Your mileage may vary, of course. It deals with both stepfordization and (particularly) pregnancy/breeding tropes. 

Bunker Type was also inspired by two pieces of media that I really disliked! Not in a "fix it fic" kin...

CMSN: Astro Comics

This was a commission for A-5013! 

Specifically, this is the last commission from the long batch I've been doing. I've been so glad that people enjoy my writing enough to commission me, and I feel bad for having to essentially close commissions for the next few weeks, but I've got some stuff irl that is going to be taking my time until at least November, and it comes first. Don't worry about stories though, because I've got multiple stories scheduled out until late November/early D...

CMSN: The Stepford Wives Return

Time for a big commission!

So far every commission I've taken has been 3k words long, but this one is 9k words, so it's definitely on the longer side of things. But it does contain 4 Stepfordizations, and it's a sequel to the Stepford Wives remake film from 2004. I had previously been commissioned, quite some time ago, to do a rewrite of that movie's ending so it would be more in line with the ending of the original 1970s film.

This commission follows from that rewritten ending, i...

Debate Me (Stepfordization)

This story started out with the intent to focus on the idea of a woman's voice and speech being controlled and restrained by her debate club rival turned husband, but as it went on, it ended up becoming more about the idea of her losing her ability to debate or disagree with him instead? As a result, you can still see some vestiges of that original idea, like Naomi not talking in the present, but on the flip side, I'll probably hold onto the speech/voice idea for another story down the road.&...

No Gain, No Pain (Commission)

This story was commissioned by Jakitron! 

The premise was that a muscular and athletic woman slowly finds herself stepfordized via subliminal messages from her Stepford-born wife, and loses her muscle mass in the process. So we've got some tomboy training, some body changes, and some classic lesbian Stepfordization! It was a lot of fun to write!

Lesbian Stepfordization is just always enjoyable to write, and I'm a sucker for a sort of "bigger they are, harder they fall" thing ...

Red (Stoplight Stepfordization)

And now, the finale of our little Stoplight Stepfordization series. 

Our last... protagonist... is DJ. From a writing standpoint, she very much is the protagonist of this story, but I think you'll find that she's very possibly the least likable protagonist I've ever written. More than any other story, this is one that deserves the warning that the characters in these stories do not reflect my actual opinions or views. 

In terms of how she represents the color Red in the ...

CMSN: The Submissive And The Obedient

This commission comes courtesy of Vasily26! And it's actually both a sequel to my stories Dear Darling Doctor and The Doctor's Wife, as well as a sequel to Vasily's story The Stepford Sisters. That's right, it's a crossover! And a very fun one, imo. 

While it's not necessarily vital to read the stories these characters come from, I do recommend reading them anyways, because Stepford Sisters is one of my absolute favorite Stepfordization stories. We've got a brand new friendship for...

Yellow (Stoplight Stepfordization)

Continuing our Stoplight Stepfordization series, we have a new protagonist, Eudora, and her own approach to being at Happy Hills Wellness Center. 

Whereas Faith was a bit of a gullible sheep who didn't even think twice about the intentions of the Happy Hills nurses, Eudora is... guarded. She's a very careful, quiet, cautious type. Heavy emphasis on cautious, with the stoplight theming. She's a character who won't be caught off guard, who will always analyze the situation she's in, ...

CMSN: Implantation (Stepfordization)

Surprise! It's another commission! This one courtesy of Shinylamp!

The idea was for a Stepfordization story in which a doctor is mind controlled and made into a housewife, while still retaining her skills and intellect, but no longer using them due to the mind control device she's been implanted with. And instead of a chip in the brain, we went with a more obvious implant, like, well, a cochlear implant! 

I don't use outright mind control too often in my work, but I'm really ...

Green (Stoplight Stepfordization)

So... I ended up doing something a little different this time? Not particularly experimental, but different. This is going to be the first of 3 stories which are all oneshots, but connected to each other. Each of these "Stoplight Stepfordization" stories is going to be something you can read on its own, but they share a setting and a general theme. 

This story, Green, is about a reporter named Faith. But unlike previous intrepid reporters I've written, who have all borrowed from Lo...

Smokeysister's Commission Info

Prices: $75 for every 3k words (general word count estimate, I won't charge you extra if I happen to write a little more than that)

Guidelines:

-Stepfordization only (ageplay/abdl and bimbo elements allowed if requested)

-All characters must be 18+

-I reserve the right to object to any subject matter I am not comfortable with or don't feel equipped to handle

-No TG (trans characters allowed, but no TG fetish)

-No racism, homophobia, or anything bigot...

CMSN: Wayward Son

For those who might not know, I recently opened up a commission slot on DA (just taking one at a time for now so I don't get overwhelmed) and this is the first commission I've written since around late 2019!

The commissioner wished to remain anonymous, and I absolutely loved the prompt they gave me to write. It's a sort of revenge fantasy in a way, and that made it a lot of fun! It's also a chance to write a story which focuses a bit more on the stepfordization of a male character, whic...

Tales Of The Milk Wars!

For those who have been enjoying my little project of exploring a universe where DC's strange Stepfordization themed "Milk Wars" crossover ended with the villains winning, I hope you enjoy this story! I had a lot of fun writing this little anthology, focusing on 3 different female heroes and their new domestic lives.

Wonder Wife starts us off, of course, since Wonder Woman is such a perfect character to Stepfordize, and because I truly adore writing her in this setting. She's very cold,...

Milk Wars - Safety Patrol

Time for us to dip once again into that weird and lovely alternate timeline in which DC Comics' Milk Wars event ended with the villains, the Retconn Corporation, successfully brainwashing the entire JLA and Doom Patrol with their reality warping milk. 

Since Milk Wars was, in fact, a battle between the Community League of Rhode Island and the Doom Patrol, it feels like the Doom Patrol perhaps should have been the first subject of this AU, but I put them off for a bit. I honestly ju...

Here's How It Happens

Here's how it happens... 

I sit down, and I write a story about the gradual stepfordization of an entire community! I thought it might be interesting to pull back a bit and show how an entire town or city could be converted into a sister-community to Stepford. As a result, there's less focus on the actual brainwashing of a person or couple, but I still think it's interesting as a one-off story. 

There isn't much tying this to my other stories, but I hope you all find it ...

Fallout: Vault 119

So... We leave a DC Comics Stepfordization story in favor of a Fallout story! 

Upfront, my credentials: I got into Fallout with Fallout 3, then played New Vegas, 2, and 4. I could never get into 76 because I'm not really an online or MMO person, but if they make a new single player offline game, I'd give it a shot. 

I've wanted to do a Fallout story for a while now, and I've read a story here and there that I've really enjoyed too. My only problem was not knowing what so...

Milk Wars: WW vs SS (Part 2/Finale)

And now for the second half of the story! 

I really really have enjoyed writing these Milk Wars stories. There's something about the hyper-normative behavior mixed with how weird and off kilter the characters act in that event, combined with how they're so 1950s wholesome that they loop around to being kinky as fuck, that delights me. Like in the original story, Wonder Wife breastfeeding a dust buster. It's so conservative and regressive for Diana, but it's also incredibly fetishy....

Milk Wars: WW vs SS (Part 1)

Once again my friends, we dive into the milky depths of a world in which DC's Milk Wars event (real thing) ended with the JLA remaining stepfordized by the Retconn Corporation. 

Thank you to $5 and $10 patrons who voted on which Milk Wars story would be written! People really wanted Wonder Wife and her Wonder Girls! 

Cassandra Sandsmark, Donna Troy, and Yara Flor were teed up in my first Milk Wars story, with Wonder Wife thinking about how she should convert them to Retc...

The House Wins: Chapter Seven (Finale)

And here we have it, the final chapter in Mallory's story, and what is currently set to be the big sendoff for her, Mya, Gabriel, and the rest. 

I don't want to spoil the chapter here in any way, shape or form, aside from saying that the way this ends is something I've had in mind since I first started to conceptualize Mallory back in Bet On Black, when she was still just a side character in Mya's story. It was always going to be how I wanted to end this saga. 

But, no s...

The House Wins: Chapter Six

As set up last chapter, I wanted to explore the idea of Mallory helping to bring another woman into the fold in Stepford, the way that most women in these stories try to help convert one another. She's been so brainwashed that she genuinely believes it's the right thing to do, and that she's doing a good thing in helping to support Stepford's patriarchy. 

The character of Kristal is a bit of a different subject for Stepfordization, however. Most of Mya and Mallory's gang were brain...

The House Wins: Chapter Five

From my count, we're now past the halfway point for this story! Current estimates place it at a total of 7 chapters, for what that's worth. 

This chapter, I wanted to focus on how Mallory and Mya's friendship has evolved in the years since they were transformed, and where it's at now. I also introduced a new character this chapter, who is here to show how Mallory interacts with "fresh meat" so to speak, and remind her of who she used to be before Stepford got its hooks into her. 2023-04-12 12:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post

The House Wins: Chapter Four

This chapter officially puts us into totally uncharted waters. All three of the previous installments were set prior to Bet On Red, the sequel to Bet On Black. With chapter four, however, we're now beyond that point in time, and can see what becomes of these characters down the road. 

Unlike previous chapters, here we see more of Mallory on her own, when it's just her and her children at home, away from friends or neighbors or her husband. We also see more into Mallory's own intern...

The House Wins: Chapter Three

While Chapter One focused on Mallory's transformation and brainwashing, and Chapter Two was a direct followup to the ending of Bet On Black, with this chapter we firmly step beyond the events of that story, and jump ahead into uncharted territory. 

Specifically, this chapter takes place between Bet On Black and Bet On Red. Mallory isn't yet pregnant with her second child, but she does have her first. It shows what an actual average day in Mallory's life is like, now that she's beco...