I love Alessa so much π
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"God bless you!" A bald man runs past Lance to throw ribbons at Kroner and Billy's manes. "God bless you all!"
Hadrian inclines his head. "And you, good fellow."
But Alessa rips the pink ribbon off Kroner's head. "God has blessed you with a pirate fleet," she seethes.
*choice
1) "And the lack of hair," you add.
2) "Alessa!" you chastise, holding back laughter.
3) You ...
2024-09-15 18:07:38 +0000 UTC
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Another one (unwillingly) joins the gang. π
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"You gonna stand there all day?"
You look over your shoulder and see that the beggar has stood up. A grey, nondescript cape covers most of his body except for a pair of well-worn boots. The hood plunges his eyes into shadow while the rest of his face is hidden beneath a black bandana. The only hand you can see is wrapped in bandages, the white popping out amidst the heavy rain.
You tug...
2024-09-11 16:31:56 +0000 UTC
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Finished Vallen's path!!!
Just reached the point where the two paths will converge, and it only took me... 117 notebook pages (Vallen is a chatty one π). I know I say this every time, but I really didn't expect it to be this big ππ Chapter 3 will probably be the longest chapter of the first half of book two due to all the variation.
But I can't say I'm not enjoying it!!
I ended up not writing the clueless version of the Vallen meeting (alth...
2024-09-07 19:35:42 +0000 UTC
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Finished Vallen!!!
Or, should I say, finish the path where you have enough clues to figure out a few truths about our Red Guard. I... like it so much π I decided to go with the version where you figure out the truth in the most narrative-appropriate moment because it inspired me the most. My hand was flying across the pages so quickly that I got a cramp xD
Today, I wrote a scene that's been on my mind for three years or so, and it was cathartic. Of course, this...
2024-09-04 21:21:23 +0000 UTC
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Vallen's Revised Introduction Scene
Besides a headless statue of a curvy woman with a thin tunic clinging to her round body, you see Vallen.
*page_break At first glance, you almost didn't recognize her
She's seated on the fountain, draped in a gown of her own. It's flowy but not baggy, and it seems lined with pure white cotton. The waist is cinched by a golden chain, intertwining on her left hip. One side of the chain drops down along the ankle...
2024-08-28 21:33:53 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
I'm sorry for taking so long to post this Progress Report. I meant to write one on Saturday, but life got in the way.
This past week went well! For the first three or four days I focused on the Bonus Content β which ended up being way longer than I planned β and then, I continued finishing the first draft of Part 2.
If you've been following me for a long, you know how much I love the handwriting stage, but I'll be honest, this part has been challenging! I wrote th...
2024-08-26 17:39:06 +0000 UTC
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Rafael
Rafael's entire body deflates. He slumps down, whether it's on top of you, bellow, or behind, limbs sprawled to the four corners of the bed, and hair flying everywhere.
He usually groans with satisfaction, like a cat lying in sunlight, and then goes silent. The first time this happened, you assumed he had fallen asleep, but as soon as you tried to move, Rafael latched ...
2024-08-23 16:11:50 +0000 UTC
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Lots of thoughts and notes for the last parts of this chapter!!
I always love the handwriting stage!! It's the most fun one β€οΈ
(The big notebook is the outline book. The little one is where I write random thoughts and sentences that pop up in my head, and the medium-sized one is where I write the chapters proper).
2024-08-20 14:25:21 +0000 UTC
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"Just try to be gentle, yes?"
The soft-spoken words echo in the halls of an underground tomb. Ancient walls rise to impregnable darkness, and by the faint light of the campfire, it seems as if there's no one else in the world but you and him.
The fire bathes half of your face, revealing to him the smile accompanying your request. It's beautiful. Lord, you're beautiful, but you use it to hide your nerves. I'd cut off my hand before hurting you, Hadrian
2024-08-18 20:05:46 +0000 UTC
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Saturdays!
How I love them. But most importantly, I love sitting down and organizing my scattered thoughts into a half-coherent post. You'd be admired how much it helps me make creative decisions.
About the Alpha Build, thank you to everyone who commented! β‘ Writing is such a lonely job, and I've been working on this update for about a month, so it's lovely to hear your thoughts and reactions to it!!!
I'll deal with the pesky bugs and typos you reported tomorrow. I hope Da...
2024-08-17 16:37:55 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
Here's the entire first part of Chapter 3! As always, it'd help me immensely if you report any errors or typos you encounter.
Here's the link!
I hope you enjoy it! πΉ
2024-08-15 14:14:07 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
I didn't make a progress report last weekend because I thought I would be done with coding on Sunday which... did not happenπ
. The code got a bit more complicated in a couple of scenes, which slowed my progress.
But I'm very close! 33 more Word pages, and I'll push the update out. It should be ready on Thursday or Friday!
This progress report is really short because I have nothing else to announce for now. I just didn't want to leave you in the dark for longer, sin...
2024-08-13 18:05:17 +0000 UTC
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Finished writing Part One of Chapter 3!!
Finally π. This second addition grew to be bigger than the first half, mostly because of the amount of variation in it. I think in one playthrough, the part already published is probably longer, but this one has more branches depending on your choices.
Some of them are bigger, others really small. As always, there are options for players who don't want to interact with anyone and would rather move on from Mist's base β‘.
This last...
2024-08-04 18:07:52 +0000 UTC
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I adore protective Hadrianπ (And slightly possessive π«£).
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Hadrian blinks, looks at Teo, hunched beside you, and his face hardens. With long strides, Hadrian gets to the bar but instead of sitting on the only available stool, he forces himself between you and Teo.
"What's this?" he asks Teo. He's a head taller than the other man and wider, and you notice him not-so-subtly pushing Teo aside.
1) "Hadrian," you say, l...
2024-08-02 17:51:50 +0000 UTC
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What's your favorite Mist reward? The one you always pick for your Romamus.
(If you got two or more in-game, choose the one you'd pick if you could only pick one).
2024-07-28 14:42:56 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
Yesterday, I reached the end of Part 1 β without the secondary paths added yet. It was supposed to be short and sweet, but Alessa had other ideas π. Tip: you might want to ask Mist about Tarek to get a little extra scene. It's small, but it speaks of things to come.
I kept working today, and I've been filling in the skipped-over choices. Most of it is boring work, but there's a really fun one coming up shortly. I'll save that one for last to keep me motivated through t...
2024-07-27 17:47:04 +0000 UTC
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The Pirate King
- A = Aftercare (what theyβre like after sex)
He rolls over, reaches into his pouch, and pulls out his pipe. The Pirate probs himself against the headboard, lightening the pipe with one hand while the other pulls you to him. He likes feeling your breasts flushed against his chest and having your bare back available to idly trace as he smokes.
His half-thumb will often push against knocks or hardne...
2024-07-22 12:13:34 +0000 UTC
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Hello, hello!
Just finished a really fun writing session, and I'm almost done with Lance. I'm a page away from wrapping up the conversation with our blue bard, and I am so excited for you all to read it! π He's so fun to write for, so different from Hadrian and Alessa, and it's refreshing for me, as a writer, to delve into. I'm finally at the stage where other main characters will have their time and I can get into their heads.
Lance's little convo is only the beginnin...
2024-07-19 18:09:53 +0000 UTC
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Hallo!
So, I was preparing this month's Bonus Stories β a little later because all I wanted to do was work on the Chapter lately πβ and I'm not sure what characters I should do for the Mature Scenario.
First, do you still want me to do the Alphabet for all the characters? Or would you prefer me to take a break from that format? I feel like my lovely patrons didn't enjoy last month's as much, and the Bonus Content is for you, so if you're not enjoying it, there's really no p...
2024-07-17 08:35:10 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
Here is almost the entirety of Part 1 of Chapter 3 β you'll see some choices that you won't be able to click, and that's intentional. I'll be adding the rest of the paths soon. I didn't want to delay this post anymore.
For now, this one is Hadrian-heavy. If you're not interested in the ex-Templar, I'd recommend waiting until the entire part is out.
Here's the link...
2024-07-13 14:24:58 +0000 UTC
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Happy Friday!
I bring good tidings. I (finally π) finished coding!! The new part passes both Quicktest and Randomtest, meaning the game is playable and has no game-breaking bugs.
All that's left is for me to personally test the last couple of scenes. I have to play through the game to check for *page_break placements, *line_breaks, and proper variable conditions. I can't tell you the number of times I find a variable that should be false as tr...
2024-07-12 17:17:12 +0000 UTC
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Just added another addition that hurt my heart to write. Just like Alessa's angsty argument, this one is also hard to come by, so I think most people won't read it. So, I'm leaving it here!
I'm sorry, Hadrian! Why did you fall in love with such a complicated person? π
(The worst parts are after the choices, so this one is lighter than Alessa's π).
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Hadrian turns his head and settles his eyes on you. He waits for a beat...
2024-07-11 13:43:05 +0000 UTC
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I'm coding in some last additions to the chapter (it's so close, I swear!), and this angsty path was so hard to write π. Alessa my darling, only I know how much this guts you.
This happens in the worst possible outcome, so most people aren't likely to see it. Let me share this here instead.
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You turn your head back at Alessa, watching her apprehensive eyes on Hadrian. "Are you sure I'm equipped to answer?" you ask, tone hissing...
2024-07-08 13:37:20 +0000 UTC
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Alain
Alain will always part with a kiss before flopping down on the bed with his arms spread out. His chest heaving, his brows glistening, and a satisfied smile tugging at his lips.
You'll both bask in the afterglow, sometimes long enough that your eyelids drift closed, other times just for a few precious moments of silent companionship, before, with a dramatic groan, Alain will roll out of bed to "draw you a...
2024-06-29 17:00:52 +0000 UTC
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This is a continuation of the May Q&A.
I won't go into too many details with this because, for some routes, it is spoilers, but I can give a little taste.
So far, Hadrian has put it out of his mind. His former headmistresses wo...
2024-06-27 19:44:52 +0000 UTC
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Hello!
I'm sorry for being so late, I wrote the Progress Report on Friday, but my internet has been terrible for a few weeks now. I spent the weekend without wifi, but the operator finally fixed it (or so they say. I still think it's slow, but I'll take it).
Anyway, coding is almost done! I hate that I have to put the almost there. Still, when I was doing the edit of Chapter 2, I read some ways that you could be terrible for Hadrian and Alessa while in a romance with them...
2024-06-24 08:31:18 +0000 UTC
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I'm almost done editing!!!
My God, I had so many questionable sentences and wonky dialogues in Chapter 2. I'm a bit embarrassed that it's been out for so long at this point π©. But this is why editing is so important. A manuscript is really just a rough draft before it.
Because of the nature of IF β in which we write different variations of the same scene β sometimes, I can use the same words or descriptions multiple times without realizing it because I'm writing them out of...
2024-06-07 18:13:01 +0000 UTC
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Hadrian
For a while, Hadrian falls asleep like a rock right after. The man has good stamina, but he's still very inexperienced, and the emotional side of sex with you takes a heavier toll than any physical activity.
Hadrian will fall on the mattress beside you, sticky hair clinging to his forehead and a glazed-eyed look on his face. It'll take him a while to come down fro...
2024-05-30 11:14:16 +0000 UTC
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Finished Writing Part 1 of Chapter 3!!!
At around 60k words, the first part of the chapter is done! This grew more than I had planned, but I saw the opportunity to reveal some of Hadrian's backstory now instead of further on as I had planned thus what was supposed to be a simple conversation expanded a bit more. π
For those of you who aren't interested in it, worry not, for, as with almost all conversations, you have the option to leave or...
2024-05-26 17:39:12 +0000 UTC
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Hadrian, to no one's surprise, would fall at around 85% Pious β it used to be higher, very close to 100, but his opinions on the Church and, especially, the Templar Order changed in the months leading to his escape. He believes in God unwaveringly, but Hadrian is no longer blind to the sins of so-called holy men.
Alessa is as cl...
2024-05-23 14:05:31 +0000 UTC
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