SSS 9: Induction
Added 2026-02-07 19:12:09 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the chapter
Freex Moreau
2026-02-08 10:09:35 +0000 UTCHmm. A bit rambling and negative, but the MC and setting seem to be interesting, it will be lovely to read more, sorry that dont really have a "fix" for this feeling I have. Could be in the minority too. I now read all 9 chapters in one read. if did not read Amelia Thornheart, I would have dropped the series or let it get more chapters to skip forward this arc. Slavery and Racism are not really "fun" themes to have on first chapters with weird rules and not really being in control. Most of the MC's actions have been passive and reactive; there are some interesting insights from her earlier memories. Not that she could have done differently, and the simmering pressure from the hatred could have intresting side effects if there is something like vampire "rage", etc. But as from the chapter, I would guess this is not the "side" we end up. Of course, it will be interesting to know more about the second system war. Not sure why it feels so different. When I compare to the Amelias' start, even though you had similar themes. Add some mind control from the system or the ability they give out to give "loyalty" to a faction, and you have the trifecta of themes that really can kill a story if not done well. Maybe it's a detriment too that expect bit style as Amelias have read misery stories before and were not as critical of those. Good luck, will be intresting to read where the story goes :)
Jywert
2026-02-08 07:59:25 +0000 UTCNoted! Thanks for the feedback, and for reading!
Keene
2026-02-07 22:27:43 +0000 UTCThanks for reading! ^>^
Keene
2026-02-07 22:27:24 +0000 UTCThanks for reading! <3
Keene
2026-02-07 22:27:16 +0000 UTCAnswered in the previous comment you left!
Keene
2026-02-07 22:27:09 +0000 UTCTftc why were the man and woman given different punishments?
Fdrugc
2026-02-07 22:15:10 +0000 UTCThanks for the chap
Annora D.
2026-02-07 21:08:53 +0000 UTCI frankly don't give much focus to the terminology. Things get clear enough even when not remembering perfectly.
Adurna
2026-02-07 20:08:57 +0000 UTCI think if the terms are used regularly and/or with context then the trickiest thing will be remembered which rank is above which. Besides that I'm looking forward to the payoff - it feels like the story will be in the camp for a while but I'm eager to see how Sanassa gets stronger while she's there!
a.
2026-02-07 20:07:43 +0000 UTCHonestly, "too much, too fast" isn't a problem. Maybe when you publish this elsewhere you can include a referable glossary of terms in an early chapter, if you're worried. Right now, I just want to get this arc over and done with. I can only imagine that the rest of this cohort (there's another Latin term for you, btw) is going to haze the new conscripts, and steal their food all the time, to zero punishment. Thinking that San is an assassin is pretty mindless, IMO. If she's weak enough to be caught by Rosalyn, to be brought to tears by having her butt spanked with a cane, then she's too weak to cut anybody's throat, as codified by this (imperfect) system. I'm still resentful of this idea that, somehow, these conscripts will actually some day feel anything but their own resentment.
CelestialDoggie
2026-02-07 19:28:23 +0000 UTCthank youf tor the chapter <3
pix
2026-02-07 19:27:17 +0000 UTC
