Morgan Yu Too, Three and Four
Added 2020-05-06 03:59:11 +0000 UTCChapters 3 and 4 for my Prey fanfic are done and are in the link. I've also linked chapters 1 and 2 for easy access (right here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NtWn_SD6GWsfY_dfZsMahykjagevRRUWZ8axzWktj0w/edit?usp=sharing )
spoilers for Prey (2017)
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Aaaa thank you so much!
Ela Maxima
2020-05-06 08:48:58 +0000 UTCagain, these characters are incredibly well-written and emote so much and so well =^.^= Morgan Prime's, like, ongoing breakdown at the fact of Morgan Too's being a woman, and her gently working them through this? Wonderful. And in C4, seeing Morgan Prime *emote through mimicry* was great, and then seeing just how good Mikhaila is at helping them along was fantastic too. Also, the closing line is fantastic =^o^= None of Morgan Prime's self-discovery feels forced by plot or forced by the other characters either and *I love it*; it's started by them confronting the reality of Morgan Too and what she being *her* means for *them* and continued by her knowing them as well as they know themself, and that feels really natural :3!
Violet Elizabeth
2020-05-06 08:48:17 +0000 UTC
