Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
I'm hard at work on the next chapters and require another discerning glance on a passage from my beloved Patrons.
Trying hard to finish another chapter before the next week, as I might be coming down with another ear infection (the other ear, this time <.<'), which will likely cut into my writing time, if it does come to pass.
Please keep in mind that this passage feedback WILL contain <...
2023-05-14 13:58:45 +0000 UTC View PostThea suddenly found herself standing next to the equipment racks, about five metres to the right of where Lan had appeared after the first round. From her past two years of Basic, she recognized that the tug at her mind had meant that she had just been reset after the fight concluded.
Going from near-unconsciousness and immeasurable pain to instant restoration and a severed emotional connection to the memory of said pain, left her feeling extremely disoriented. Though she appreciated th...
2023-05-12 19:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostHello everyone, LunaWolve here!
The Discord has been created yesterday, as some of you might already know by now.
If you have properly set up your discord and patreon integration, you should have received an invitation already. If Patreon or Discord is being stupid, or you didn't connect them properly, then you might be surprised to hear this is a thing!
So here's the invite link, so you can join manually: htt...
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Welcome to the draft release of Chapter 17 for y'all.
As always, a quick reminder that this chapter is still in the process of being workshopped by me and that this ...
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Welcome to the draft release of Chapter 16 for y'all.
I'm still in the process of workshopping this chapter, but I'm fairly happy with the way it is now, at first gl...
2023-05-10 14:30:48 +0000 UTC View Post---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Welcome to the release of Chapter 15 for y'all.
Before we get into this chapter, please be aware that chapter 10 (Harsh Reality) was just released on RR and
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Welcome to the draft release of Chapter 15 for y'all.
I'm still in the process of workshopping this chapter, but I'm fairly happy with the way it is now, at first gl...
2023-05-08 14:02:57 +0000 UTC View PostHello everyone, LunaWolve here!
I'm hard at work on the next chapters and require another discerning glance on a passage from my beloved Patrons.
Please keep in mind that this passage feedback WILL contain spoilers for upcoming chapters, by necessity. So if you're not interested in reading passages from future chapters ahead of time, do not engage with this post, below the disclaimer!
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2023-05-07 10:43:25 +0000 UTC View Post---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
This one ended up being another chonker, unfortunately!
I apologise for the back-to-back long chapters. I will try my best to make sure the future ones are more alon...
2023-05-05 19:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostThis one features a massive spoiler for the next Patreon chapter (Chapter 14), so I can't ask the general Patreons on feedback for it.
Figured I could ask all of you instead, as you've already read chapter 14 yesterday!
The 'Let me pick your Brain' series is a series of passage feedback requests, in which I will be posting some (HIGHLY WIP) passages, to receive some general feedback on for future chapters.
That means this post will contain MASSIVE SPOILERS for th...
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Welcome to the second-time release of Chapter 14 for y'all.
This is what it looks like when an author is still workshopping ideas for the chapter, but releases chapt...
2023-05-03 19:59:05 +0000 UTC View PostTHIS CHAPTER IS DEPRECATED AND HAS BEEN REPLACED BY A NEW VERSION.
THIS VERSION OF THE CHAPTER INCLUDES POTENTIAL SPOILERS FOR FUTURE CHAPTERS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Just a quick headsup, that I will be making a small adjustment to the $15 Tier (Wolf Lord [Edit: And Fixer]) going forward.
The change is as follows:
- Added a new Benefit called Overflow/Draft Chapters.
$15 Patrons will get the Overflow chapters from today on, going forward. There are currently none of them available, but it's likely I'll finish chapter 14 today, which would fall under this new rule. This post is in preperation for that...
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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Chapter 8 (Digitisation) has just been released on RR.
There have only been minor alterations from the Patreon chapter, so it's not technically nece...
2023-05-02 19:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostHello everyone, LunaWolve here!
I'm hard at work on the next chapters and require another discerning glance on a passage from my beloved Patrons.
I'm still waiting on more votes for the initial Poll in the last post (Let me pick your Brain! - Part 1) to make a final decision on how I want to handle passage feedback going forward.
Up until then, I will simply post a couple more, to provide further ...
2023-04-30 13:27:53 +0000 UTC View PostHello everyone, LunaWolve here!
Part of the reason I wanted to create this Patreon was to have a larger pool of "Alpha Readers", so to speak.
It's the pool of readers that get first dibs on my chapters, but also on passages that I'm not 100% sure about, in order to gather feedback before release.
For this reason, I would like gauge general interest with this post here, to figure out whether this is something that the majority of you want to partake in, whether it's somethin...
2023-04-29 15:33:58 +0000 UTC View PostThea leaned forward in her chair, eagerness written on her face. This was exactly what she had been hoping for from the Systems 101 class: specifics!
Even back on Lumiosia, she had always been obsessed with the fundamental mechanics of the games she played, striving to extract every last bit of efficiency from everything she could, to gain an advantage. And what was the basic structure of the Allbright System akin to, if not a massive, galaxy-spanning game?
“The Allbright System...
2023-04-28 20:54:00 +0000 UTC View PostWhen Thea awoke the next morning from the vibrations of her wristband, she experienced a strange mixture of feelings.
On one hand, she felt rested and re-energized like never before. The exhaustion from the previous day, both in mind and body, coupled with the incredibly comfortable bed and pyjamas the UHF had provided for her, had allowed her to sleep like a rock.
On the other hand, she felt out of place. Both in her body and in the room she was in. Thea was not yet used to her n...
2023-04-28 20:32:01 +0000 UTC View PostAs the door slid open with a familiar woosh, Alpha Squad stepped inside their new living quarters, and their eyes widened in awe at the luxurious interior. The shared living space boasted a comfortable, spacious layout, complete with plush seating and a state-of-the-art entertainment system.
The open-concept kitchen featured sleek, modern appliances and a generous island, perfect for meal preparation and socialising. The walls were adorned with artwork and decorative lighting, cre...
2023-04-28 20:13:01 +0000 UTC View PostAround half a minute later, as the members of Alpha Squad were just about done with opening the different clothing racks inside the walls, the first Sim-Pods started opening with their characteristic, quiet hissing.
Thea was slightly surprised by the sudden opening of the Sim-Pods, as she had heard no noise being emitted from them at all. She had figured that there’d be some kind of indication that the Recruits were in the process of being transferred over, but she had been unable to ...
2023-04-28 19:58:08 +0000 UTC View PostHello everyone, LunaWolve here \o/
Welcome to the Patreon and thank you in advance, if you decide to support me.
The Patreon is still in the process of being filled, so please give me a couple of hours/days to get everything set up properly.
Right now there is only 1 chapter (Chapter 8) available, although that won't really do much for anyone, as Chapter 7 hasn't even been released yet.
The rest of the advance chapters are in the process of being vetted by m...
2023-04-28 09:13:02 +0000 UTC View PostThe company of Recruits, under the watchful eyes of Major Quinn, continued their brisk march through the hallways of the Sovereign. The imposing corridors were lined with sleek metal panels that reflected the soft, ambient lighting above. Occasionally, they passed by massive reinforced doors, their surfaces adorned with various symbols and identifications, hinting at the vital areas and facilities they concealed within.
As they proceeded deeper into the ship, Thea couldn't help but marv...
2023-04-27 14:10:58 +0000 UTC View Post