Me and Wcross tried a bunch of different compositions to refine my initial cover idea, and we went with this, which was the forth idea I pitched. Glad we went through so many different ideas, since this one is by far the best.
Also you can see here the cover logo and design I had to pay for. Ignore the white text. I'm gonna fix that. Kinda took a decent chunk of money to get it made, but it's reusable for different volumes. Worried about the budget for more pictures, but we'll see how i...
Man, the rewrites are kicking my ass. My fault for adding so much new content to them... but I'm almost done. I'm just finishing up the new boss battle at the end of the volume, and then it'll lead right into Zutiria showing up and then the book will end.
Then I still gotta go through like 15 chapters and add 1000-2000 new words to them, but I digress.
I'm really conflicted about what to do after lol. I'll prolly make a longer blog about it sometime soon.
Together, we head back in so I can break down the plan for today's questing. Sam has herself a seat on the nearest table while I gather something from the quest board.
The monster I have in mind will be a slight step up in challenge, but Sam doesn't initially take the threat seriously when I reveal the monster's quest flier. I hand it off to her, and right away, she squints her eyes, looking at the drawing of her target with confusion. "What the hell is a 'Pigling', Boss?" She asks as i...
Unlike the day before, nothing goes awry during our time away from home. Instead, Sam and I have a straightforward adventure where she continues improving on her basic skills against both Slimes and Living Fungi alike. The only thing that shakes up this routine is a few times where we run into a more powerful monster that we weren't expecting. Skirting so close to the Gnarled Woods like this means we can't really help the occasional Hell Bear sighting or crossing paths with a Laughing Lickslu...
Sorry about how long new content is taking. I keep feeling bad about it, especially because I'm adding a whole new thing to the rewrites. Sam and GM had a normal day adventuring before the come home to find Zutiria already waiting for them. Now, to give this book a proper 'finale', there's going to be a new chapter featuring a boss battle so Sam has had more visible progress by the end of it.
I'm just paranoid that taking time editing makes some patrons impatient. I don't want to lose s...
The following day, I awaken from the morning light creeping in from the window above my bed. I find myself still comfortably pressed into my lover's sunshine-colored locks from behind. I breathe in the smell of them, still finding them just as refreshing and womanly as the night before. Sam is cuddled up against me, naked except for one of my t-shirts and still deep asleep.
Not long after I awaken, I notice the insistent swelling between my legs, which in my tired state of mind, I start...
The last couple of days I've had like four new $15 supporters and I just wanted to touch base and tell you thank you, and that I'm working hard to get back to doing new chapters. It should only be a few days. I'm currently invested in the volume rewrites and the editing, but the rewrites are almost done. When they are, I'll be doing new chapters and editing on the side.
Too long has it been since I'd had a chance to cut back and prepare something that isn't just simple tripe. A Living Fungi is far from what I'd call gourmet, but it's a step up from the stuff I've grown used to these last couple of years as money became tighter and tighter.
Since Sam killed the monster we brought back with a horizontal slash, it means that the large red, white-spotted cap is fully intact. First, I wash it in the sink to clean ...
Idk how many of you have been reading the rewrites and expanded chapters since the likes on them have been low, but I really need people to check over them in detail. People experienced with Google Docs who I can give editing access to and add comments.
I don't care what level patron you are, this is an open offer lol.
I need people to look not only for typos but for where I might have not finished a sentence, as well as any contradictions I've made.
Now that we're back on the grassy plains and searching for more Slimes, things proceed smoothly. We run into plenty of them in no time at all, and Sam gets straight to work. She's waited long enough to cut loose today, and she really needs to blow off some steam. As for me, I'm here to make sure she doesn't get carried away and to continue giving advice.
Aside from just general signs of Sam getting sloppy, the main thing I’m on the lookout for is any sign of overconfidence.
Here we are again. With a grand total of one Slime killed, Sam and I are already back in the bedroom after a hard day's work. We're eager with lust, as we always are, but things are different this time. We both know we can't just jump into it without a care in the world. The situation at hand needs to be discussed in detail, and we need to develop a way to test things out and determine if what I believe to be true actually is- that my semen is somehow making Sam stronger.
I am still slaving away at the work required for the volume 1 release. Specifically, I am trying to finish the rewrites of chapter 12 and chapter 13, since that is the perfect place to end volume one on. (It would end on the scene where they come home and find Zutiria waiting for them)
The problem atm is Chapter 12 is probably the biggest rewrite I've done so far lol. A lot of stuff happened in the original, stuff that would've been much better if given more time to breath.
Normally I don't ask for additional funding like this, but for the upcoming Volume 1 release I want to see if anyone is willing to help me fund some art to put in the book, all made by Wcross , who is also doing the cover.
Each pic costs $30-60 and while doing one for every chapter in this release (there'll be about 22, I think) is probably impossible, I'd like to include at least 10.
I know we've needed a picture of Sam wearing the armor that Gwin made her for a very, very long time, and now that day has come thanks to WCross , who is going to be my go-to artist for a lot of things from now on! He'll be doing the cover for the ebook, as well as art for inside of the book that I'm planning!
Whew boy this one adds a lot. Went from 1600 words to 3200.
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Sam stares down the gooey monster with the best fierce glare she can muster, her emerald eyes showcasing a surprising amount of bottomless rage. Such animalistic anger leaves me floored and even a little downright intimidated, honestly. You’d almost think that the Slime owed her money, what with the way she’s staring at it.
The tension breaks in seconds flat as the Slime ceases its staredown, lunging towards t...
I'm in talks with an artist to do the covers for books I put out. I did this incredibly basic sketch to show my idea for it, lol. Thought I would share.
I did this one randomly last night. Old version was 1,800 words, now it's 3,000.
Please point out any mistakes you notice!
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It’s been over an hour since I managed to get Sam to retire to the bedroom for the night, and I’ve been hobbling about on this damn injured shin of mine ever since. When that fearsome Princess kicked me, she really meant it and put a lot of her super-strength behind it. It’s throbbing like no one’s business. Does that damned brat really want to...
I just want you guys to know that I'm going to be expanding on the early chapters again. Not rewriting them, but specifically adding more words.
I have a friend who apparently got some big connections to some of Amazon Haremlit's big writers, and they helped him sell a lot of copies of the book he put up. Like, a lot of copies. I don't wanna tell how much money he made, but if I could do the same it'd certainly change my always awful financial situation for the better
We open on narration from Ghorza about Grurguhrock, more specifically, it's desert where he grew up. He lived a simple life, and was the first child of his father, Urzog.
We hear how much his father meant to him, and how much Ghorza respected him. It meant everything to the young Orc to gain his father's approval, and he followed after him everywhere like a shadow.
Unlike a lot of Orc fathers,...
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The Bards of Karnalle have developed their own offshoot of magic from traditional spellcasting known as Performance. It leans more towards the selfless white magic type, but its practitioners are not always good people by default unlike the majority of white magic users. The difference between Performance and casting spells is that Mages enforce their will through specific magic words, whereas Bards enforce their will through playful rhymes, poems and so...
Qadira is a twenty-two year old Magi from Kissuara now living in Karnalle, specifically Hunnihome in the Echora province.
She was born inside of one of Salmazah's many brothels to a prostitute and an unknown father. Her early days were lonely due to her mother constantly having to work to provide for the two of them, instilling a strong sense of independence in the young girl from an early age. Her life wasn't all bad, though. Qadira was close to many of her mother's co-workers, she had...
Moon goddess. very strict, but very kind. Main themes are purity and grace.
Wears a burka to conceal her beautiful silvery skin which is blinding to mortals, and her priestesses wear burkas to honor her.
Her worshippers must pray to her every night when the moon is out, and they must face the moon. Kissuara has no winters and the hours do not change, meaning the moon will be out the same time.
Worshippers view the night time as a time of peac...
I am almost done with all of the prep work I need to do for the spinoff story, so I want to focus on getting all of those background documents done just to finally get it out of the way. It shouldn't take me long. I'll have stuff to post soon to show for it.
Another piece of background data I need to write Ghorza's spinoff. If you've read his bio, you know that his Clan means everything to him and it's the entire reason he emigrated. Therefore, I wanted a name, age and a couple of sentences about every one of his siblings and his three mothers so that he can actually reference them in his dialogue.
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Urzog
Deceased at Age 45 A powerful Orc warrior of Tribe Kurdhakka and the former leader of his Clan, Gazrag...
This character has been mentioned in all of the bios of Ghorza's party. She is not a character I sold to Mizako, I own her, but she's important to writing his commissioned story so I needed to have a bio sheet on her for my own uses.
I think she has a lot of potential, so I don't know what will end up happening with her just yet. We'll have to see how her appearance goes in Ghorza's story.
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The Guild Mistress of the Hunnihome Adventurer's Guild
