A Soldiers Life Chapter 58 Posted
Rescued?
2023-08-24 17:42:46 +0000 UTC View Post
For some of my stories I do a different character POV to do some world building. I let the readers vote what they want to hear about. Something happening in the background the MC is not aware of. The Bartiradian general was a sample but I felt that was needed to explain the intense pursuit. So here is the poll for a Septemebr POV (August Poll). Hopefully something interested you
2023-08-24 02:38:36 +0000 UTC View PostHope to have Chap 58 by noon tomorrow!
2023-08-24 00:40:09 +0000 UTC View PostI hoped to get another chapter done tomorrow but we will see as I have 4 chapters on another story to catch up on
2023-08-21 16:10:33 +0000 UTC View Posttrying this sequence again. more expansive reasoning in the chapters and different ending for 55. added about 1400 words between the two chapters. feedback is welcome
2023-08-19 23:56:52 +0000 UTC View PostThis a thread for chapter 54/55 direction discussion and the author's intended direction.
First in 54...the company fleeing the city. That was always intended to be the result of the siege. A desperate run from the enemy. It was to show that Castile was 'expendable' by the Empire. The reason for the flight which I do not know if it works was 1) the city was going to fall and the regular army was going to surrender, 2) legionnaires and legion mages are usually exe...
2023-08-17 16:32:22 +0000 UTC View Postok the second of two tough chapters to write. some of you guessed the outcome already. maybe it needs tweaking. some will call the MC smart, some stupid, i am hoping for the middle ground - overly cautious, enjoy the read
2023-08-17 03:14:42 +0000 UTC View PostThis is a hard chapter to get right. Hopefully, it still falls in the 'plausibility' realm for the readers. Feel free to bash it on discord. Working on the next chapter now but can edit this one....
2023-08-16 19:25:12 +0000 UTC View PostThis is a POV chapter. There will probably not be a lot of them for this story but thought this might be a change of pace and give background and some world-building.
Hope you enjoy reading.
2023-08-14 22:02:31 +0000 UTC View Postok part two of the seige. let me know how you think it is going
2023-08-13 00:30:19 +0000 UTC View PostVote for Eryk's nickname....not the ultimate list so feel free to offer suggestions in the comments. it will be used later in the story as his alias when he is doing unpleasant things.
Facts to draw on:
he was the only legionarie groomed in company (likes to be clean)
he has a private room, stays locked inside alone
killed 5 of 7 people in basement besting Konstantin
he has a dimensional space
he has been declared dead and found alive...
2023-08-11 13:51:28 +0000 UTC View Postfeel free to discuss ending on discord on in comments but try not to spoil it for others.
2023-08-10 20:17:33 +0000 UTC View PostHere is the long awaited chapter 50....the big reveal
2023-08-10 01:44:10 +0000 UTC View Postenjoy....everyone probably wants chapter 50 with the ending of this one but it will be written on Wednesday
2023-08-08 02:27:28 +0000 UTC View Postjust another old partial story I wanted to add for those interested in my past writing efforts. unedited and full of grammar errors
2023-08-07 23:33:43 +0000 UTC View PostJuly winner was Lorae Fadrae, dark elf from the city of Llorth!! I have two POV chapters to write now. I might have to make the POV chapters part of the regular 2 chapter a week release as I am not finding the 5-6 hours to write them. But we will see. This month choices!
2023-08-04 23:00:30 +0000 UTC View PostHere is a Discord for readers to discuss the story for A Soldier's Life. I have not had much success with Discord in the past, and you all write a lot on Patreon, so I'm not sure it is needed. Sometimes, the link expires after a time, so I don't know what I did when creating it. If you do post in there, be respectful of everyone's opinions and ideas. I will try to check-in. The link should be good for 30 days.
let me know if this reveal is too big - too fast (at end of chapter). i can change the ending of the chapter and pull it.
I had a long day in the sun working so got writing really late today. Starting on Starship now
2023-08-04 01:28:14 +0000 UTC View PostI edited this chapter on 8/3 as it needed more clarity in the writing.
2023-08-02 23:39:35 +0000 UTC View PostI posted to RR this morning, so added another here to keep it 12 chapters ahead. Two more coming Wed. Next day and a half, though is devoted to Incubus Life.
2023-07-31 21:10:10 +0000 UTC View Post
DISCORD LINK for All Stories Should Not expire - PM me if it does
A note on the Apple Patreon App: If you subscribe through the Patreon app, Apple takes 40% of your fee before Patreon deducts their 20% cut. Additionally, I do not have access to any payments made through the App for 75 days for those subscribing that way, and yes, that is as bad as it sounds. I have...
2023-07-19 16:07:07 +0000 UTC View PostJune Winner-Selina (Sana Valin)...sometime in next two weeks willbe posted... - she is very old and powerful mage. This will be a World Building Chapter centered around the mage. Sana Valin grew up in Skyholme a long time ago but left for the lowlands. She visits Skyholme to check on her descendants. She came back as Callem had befriended her the last time she visited. Options for next months POV chapter follow.
2023-06-30 23:18:27 +0000 UTC View PostSpecial Thanks to the following for membership and selecting the advanced chapters: Kingpin09, Rd Zg, Kompass, Christian Mordel Anderson, SubJef, TechMagic, Allen Walker
An Incubus Life (+5 Chapters)....bonus chapter for being late in postings coming to bring in to 6 chapters ahead (coming soon!)
A Soldier's Life (+2 Chapters)
The First World Sphere (+0 Chapter)
Starship Engineer (+0 Chapter)
Tow Builder (+0 Chapter)
2023-06-27 23:07:40 +0000 UTC View Post
Been awhile since I updated this. Spoilers may be within these sheets, so forewarning.
An Incubus Life - updated 2/16/24
A Soldier's Life - updated 1/15/25....MAP updated...rough dungeon map in excel spreadsheet...inventory updated
World Sphere - updated 6/4/24
Starship Engineer - updated 6/21/23
Town Builder - updated 7/26/24
A new addition is the world map for A Soldier's Life - the World is called Desia, and I am editing the info s...
2023-06-22 00:26:49 +0000 UTC View Postvote on this months POV chapter. I realize I noted this as a 'bonus' world building chapter in the last post so I will need to make good on another chapter next cycle. So three chapters next Fri-Sat for this story
2023-06-04 17:58:40 +0000 UTC View PostEvery month for World Sphere there will be a bonus POV chapter not part of the story to build the world and environment. The poll will run for most of the month and the bonus chapter will release in the first week of the following month.
2023-05-01 14:00:25 +0000 UTC View Post