Smokey

Switching Proper Places: Part 10 (FINALE)

And here we are at last...

It's been a very long road (it feels like it anyhow) writing this story, and I'm so very pleased with how its wrapped itself up. For reference, this is twice the length of Bet On Black, and it's easily one of, if not the, longest stories I've written. But I'm glad that I paced it the way I did.

I wanted it to build up to Rory flipping the tables on Nina, and then building tension again up to this chapter here. I won't spoil what happens in the chapter...

Switching Proper Places: Part 9

The dinner party from hell continues! But doesn't end, not just yet~

I really do hope people have been enjoying Switching Places. I've got a few ideas for what will come afterwards, but I'm still ruminating on how long they should be and what schedule they should update on. It can be tricky with longer stories like these, trying to find a balance where people who enjoy them can keep up with the story they like, without alienating people who don't enjoy that particular story. I'm still ...

Like Mother, Like Daughter (CMSN)

Thank you Vasily for commissioning me to write this!

I don't want to spoil what this story is about too much, but I will say that it's a sort of sequel/spinoff to an early story of mine, way back when I first started doing short stories instead of captions. I hope you all enjoy~

Writing Commissions Open

Just wanted to let everyone know that I have commission slots available currently! If you'd like to grab one, please do DM me!

The rules are the same as last time:

•$100 for every 3,000 words (the length of an average story marked as a commission, for reference)

•Stepford, Bimbos, Littles, all are acceptable subject matter

•No incest or TG fetish (trans characters are okay though)

•Turnaround time is roughly 2-4 weeks depending on story length

CMSN: Retvrn And Regret (Part 2/Finale)

Thank you so much to Jakitron for the commission!

And thus concludes Retvrn And Regret! I had a blast getting to write about someone getting exactly what they wished for, but being upset that they have to share it with people they hated. And this story in particular does take a slightly sweeter turn in the end, with our protagonist being somewhat redeemed by her life in Stepford.

Enjoy!

Switching Proper Places: Part 8

I believe I've mentioned this at the start of this story, but Switching Places' tone and length are actually a product of me taking inspiration from another writer. If you look around on AO3, I highly recommend searching for a few stories by the author Clairanette/Clairacuddles. Her story Matron's Handmaiden was a big influence on this, especially its early chapters, when it was more of a cat and mouse game between two lead characters. It's a much more well written story, of course, but I'm d...

Drawing Commissions Open!

Soooo I was recently talked into this by a few people in a server over on Discord, and I'm making a post here to let everyone know! I'm officially taking on a few drawing commissions! I'll post the guidelines below, as well as a few examples of recent art of mine that I've done for people! Nothing that gets posted here, as it wouldn't be right to give away for free what my $10 Patrons are paying for.

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Prices: $80 per character, drawing will be full body and have lineart an...

Milk Wars: Day One

Returning to the fabulously weird DC alternate universe, inspired by the equally fabulous and equally weird DC crossover!

Since Milk Wars, DC has been on a strange Stepfordization kick, actually. Wonder Woman has been stepfordized twice more (in Sensation Comics and her current series), Poison Ivy has been stepfordized twice (both during DC's Knightmares event, along with Catwoman, Harley Quinn, and Batman, once each), and there have been covers implying the same to characters like Ba...

Switching Proper Places: Chapter 7

Chapter 7, here we come! This time with a look at how Rory and Nina first met, contrasted with their relationship now, and continuing their little back and forth now that the truth is out in the open.

But what's next? A very special dinner party in Part 8~

CMSN: Retvrn And Regret (Part 1)

Thank you so much to Jakitron for the commission!

This story touches on something I've only delved into a small handful of times before, that being the idea of someone who idolizes Stepford and its ideals and thinks of it as their personal dream world, only to find out it's not what they expected. Specifically, thinking of it as an alt right or reactionary community, only to see that Stepford (or my version of it anyways) has plenty of marginalized people living in it, all togeth...

CMSN - Dva's New Sponsor (Overwatch Stepford)

This story was commissioned by Shinylamp!

While this story is in continuity with the other Overwatch Stepfordization stories I've written for Shinylamp, it takes place quite some time after the Talon storyline those pieces are covering, and deals with everyone's favorite gamer girl turned mecha pilot turned popular cosplay. Hope you enjoy!

CMSN: Eventually, Eve

Thank you so so much Rohith for commissioning this story!

Before you all go and read this story, I actually suggest going back and re-reading my two part story All Hallows Eve, which this is a sequel to! I actually have had ideas for this sequel ever since writing All Hallows Eve, but when I was commissioned to write about a day in Eve's life, I saw my chance to tell that story I'd been ruminating on!

I won't spoil anything about the story, except just to say that this won't be...

Commissions Currently Open!

Just wanted to let everyone know that I have commission slots available once again! If you'd like to grab it, please do DM me!

The rules are the same as last time:

•$100 for every 3,000 words (the length of an average story marked as a commission, for reference)

•Stepford, Bimbos, Littles, all are acceptable subject matter

•No incest or TG fetish (trans characters are okay though)

•Turnaround time is roughly 2-4 weeks depending on story length

Switching Proper Places: Part 6

I don't want to spoil the events of this chapter, so I won't say anything here about its contents. Just that it's my personal favorite so far, and that it sets the stage for everything that's to come down the road...

I hope you enjoy~

A Quick Update On The Recent Poll Outcome!

So, for those who are at the $5 and $10 tier, you already know that there was a poll to determine which Stepford housewife makes her grand return in a new story this year. For those who didn't know, well, now you know!

I do promise, that story is on its way! It's just going to be a bit of a big one, and I'm actually collaborating on it with another writer! I'm super super excited, we're taking turns with different scenes and it's coming together amazingly so far. I don't know exactly wh...

Three Times Makes A Pattern

Soooooo somebody on another site just linked me to some upcoming comic previews, and it turns out that the new Wonder Woman comic is going to involve Diana being brainwashed into a 1950s housewife.

Again.

For the third time in the past 10 years.

I actually had a conversation with a friend a while back about how, after the second time Wonder Woman was stepfordized, I thought that twice is a coincidence but three times is a pattern. How if Wonder Woman gets stepfordized a ...

Soldier Girl (CMSN)

This story was a commission for ProSailor22! Thank you so much for commissioning me!

CONTENT WARNING: This story does feature a scene which is in some ways reminiscent of public shootings. Considering the world we live in, and the fact that some people tragically may have had real life experiences of that sort, I do want to just give a heads up about that.

I know I say this a lot, but I really do mean it when I say that I loved the idea for this commission. The idea was that a PMC...

Switching Proper Places (Part 5)

As we head into chapter 5 of Rory's story, I just want to say that I hope everyone is enjoying the slow burn story here. I'm really enjoying writing it, and I think that the stories I enjoy working on are the ones that turn out the best in the end. 

Hope you enjoy!

Stepford Variety Hour

So, you may be thinking to yourself "this isn't Switching Proper Places", to which I say you're absolutely right!

Switching Proper Places is going to end up being a pretty long story, in all honesty. It's very much a slow burn, and it's easily going to be longer than Bet On Black or The House Wins or basically any other story I've posted here. I don't know exactly how long it will end up being, since I'm really just letting it take its natural course. I have an ending in mind, but the j...

Commissions Open!

SMOKEY'S WRITING COMMISSIONS!

Prices: $100 for every 3k words (general word count estimate, I won't charge you extra if I happen to write a little more than that)

Guidelines:

-Stepfordization only (ageplay/abdl and bimbo elements allowed if requested)

-All characters must be 18+

-I reserve the right to object to any subject matter I am not comfortable with (such as incest) or don't feel equipped to handle

-No TG (transgender characters are fine, just...

Switching Proper Places (Part 4)

Related to this chapter, I ran a poll with $5 and $10 patrons to determine whether this story would be light and fluffy, ala Fitting In, or darker and rougher, and the latter option won out! So with that in mind, this chapter is where things start to really get rough between our leads.

This story is also a bit of a mirror to previous ones I've written in regards to the main couple. Despite keeping secrets from her, Gabriel and Mya in Bet On Black really do care about each other and don'...

Switching Proper Places (Part 3)

I'm really happy so far with the pace of this story. I've been reading some fantastic (non-stepford) writing by a few other creators lately, and it's something that I sorely needed to reinvigorate me and give me new ideas for my own work. Not cribbing ideas, but stuff like getting me to realize that a slower, more deliberately paced story could be the change I need to keep my interest in my own work up. 

I don't know how long this story is going to be, and I don't know the exact pa...

CMSN: Ol Miss (Parts 1 and 2)

This story was commissioned in two parts by A-5013! 

Also an update of sorts. Due to switching PCs, I no longer have access to one of the two programs I'd use for formatting for these files. So until I do get a replacement for that program or a similar file type, I'm only able to upload txt files for the time being. Thankfully, most of my stories coming up over the next few weeks/months are already pre-scheduled from before this change, so they'll have both file types still, until ...

Switching Proper Places (Part 2)

Continuing from the previous chapter, we have Rory's first full day in Pleasantville! 

One of the things I wanted to do with this story was really define a town that is similar to Stepford, but does have its differences. One of those is the fact that, in the version of Stepford I write, men typically aren't brainwashed. Sure, some are, and I've written a story or two that involve that, but by and large it's just the housewives who are being changed from their natural selves. <...

Switching Proper Places (Part 1)

Here we are, with a brand new story! This one has a few aspects which were chosen by $5 and $10 Patrons via polls, such as the location and the, shall we say, pet names? Used by our new lead characters?

Specifically, this is a story about a Domme and sub, Nina and Rory, who find themselves in a town similar to Stepford. One that has actually been mentioned in a handful of stories before! Pleasantville (named after the very very good movie), was mentioned in both A Simple Day and The Hou...

Overwatch Goes Stepford Part 3

Sorry, had to take down the original and reupload! Accidentally posted an earlier draft by mistake. 

Influence Me: Chapter 3 (finale)

Here we have the finale of Influence Me! I originally intended for this to be a longer story, with my outline clocking in at about 5 chapters, but eventually I realized that each chapter was basically just ending in the same place with minor changes occurring, so I took it back in and rewrote this chapter specifically. I put a bit more emphasis on our protagonist becoming like Beth, and striking up a budding relationship with her plastic surgeon, rather than a constant 4 chapters of "surgery,...

CMSN: The Housewife Detective

I wanted to thank Rohith for commissioning this story! It was a joy to write!

I've done one or two stories before that deal with the idea of a character looking for somebody who went missing, only to turn up in Stepford as a housewife, but I loved the fact that this story particularly deals with a police detective who is trying to track those people down. I'm very happy with how it turned out, and I hope you all enjoy it!

Influence Me (Chapter 2)

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We're officially at 2/3 chapters for this story! I don't have a whole lot to say about it, but I have enjoyed writing it!

Hope you enjoy!

CMSN - Overwatch Goes Stepford Part 2

This story was a commission, courtesy of Shinylamp! Thank you so much for the commission! 

Continuing from Part 1, we have Sombra becoming fully brainwashed by New Life and their Hypnos Program, and a little teaser of what's to come with a particular blue-skinned sniper. I'm super excited to get to the next piece of this story, which will most likely be after the new year, and show how one of my two former mains fares once she confronts Sombra!